Man, just when the story was getting good! Even though it was only two chapters, I really enjoyed reading this! Hopefully, you'll continue one day in the future!

I am a bit curious about where this is going. Please continue. I've never scene something quite like this and am curious to see what will happen between the combination of Conan and this version of Shiratori. I also like how the main part of the lust and attraction seems to be the result of a mental and intellectual interest, rather than physical. I would rather that other characters like Heiji don't get involved, and for this to mainly be solved through Conan's intelligence and willingness to sacrifice himself. I look forward to whatever comes next!

I read this awhile ago and I've re read it a few times, I think the plot is pretty interesting, I have been hoping you would update for awhile! I still hope you continue this eventually...

I know it's been awhile since you last posted but I would really love if you picked this up again, I know inspiration is really fickle but hopefully all these reviews spur on some ideas?

I hope you update!

Aniki-XVI must be pretty disappointed, seeing as you never bothered to finish this.

are you ever going to finish this one? :( i want to know so badly whats going to happen *sighsigh*

To bad that you stopped writing on this! I would have liked it a lot. But maybe you pick this story up again and then I will be there ;)

I can not explain why I like this .
Perhaps because it is dark sufficiently?
LOL
Write wonderful! Whole story seems real.

This is the continuation of my review. God. Its awesome. im sure shiratori is not a necrophilia but a pedophilia. Right? Though im not really sure. But is that really shiratori? Or it just a man in disguise as shiratori. And why take boys not girls. Or is it shiratori is into boys. And the way he licked his lips. My gosh. Im screaming due to excitement. Im gonna nosebleed and im thinking too much that my head is starting to swirl. Now now. Please update. This story is awesome. And conan can feel the amount of lust in shiratori he must know that shiratori is...going to...to...you know... Rape? Well...this story is tragedy. And i dont know who will die. Please dont tell us who will die until the time is right. It might ruin the story. Jk. But really UPDATE!

Oh my god!
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY!THIS STORY IS AWESOME THAT ONLY IN THE CHAPTER 1 I STARTED SCREAMING! SHIRATORI KISSED CONAN! THATS A BOMB!PLEASE UPDATE!IM SO EAGER TO KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO THEM. AND ABOUT THE THOUGHT OF CONAN ABOUT SHIRATORI... LUST...OH MY GOD! I ALREADY THINK WHAT WILL HAPPEN. HE WILL RAPE CONAN! GOSH. Please update. UPDATE. ITS MY FIRST TIME TO READ THIS KIND OF STORIES AND ITS SO UNIQUE AND PLEASE UPDate.
Sorry about the caps lock. Im just so eager with this story.

I'm a bit curious on what will happen next :D Although with a very harsh/climax point like beginning I think you meant for the two chapters to be the introduction to the story :) Update soon! :)

i'm don't think Kudou should be worried about necrophilia too much. if i were him, i would be worried about pedophilia! there isn't any of that in this story ... right -_-;
i did see the m rating, but i'm still holding on to the small chance that is has nothing to do with anything sexual.
lol
also i just realized hat you did mention character death in the summary, so ignore that from my previous review.
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i realized why the kidnapper took conan bu why the other two kids?
they're just really kids. what did they do to piss off mouri's enemies?
any why just the boys, and not ai and ayumi? is he like into little boys lol eww! HAHA
no but seriously why only take those tow. it seems kind of random and more troublesome than it worth

What Shiratori is one of the bad guys! NOOO!
are you sure that it's not just a bad guy wearing a mask of shiratori?
lol i liked him

and one important question; you said this was a tragedy. does this mean that there is character death? by that i mean does any of the main "good" characters die?

(please say no! . )

This story has really captured my attention. It is insanely well written. It also has a certain complexity about it that I enjoy. Please continue? I look forward to reading more.

WOW! I LOVE IT!MORE! UPDATE PLEASE!THANKS!