Reviews for King's Pawn
creativesm75 chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
sad. somehow it's like he lives to suffer...
riverrat chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
"Because everyone uses me, no matter where I go. Because I have been manipulated for so long I don't know if I would be able to survive on my own."
Beautiful piece but so sad. Poor Severus.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
Poor Severus
YuriyTalaIvanov chapter 1 . 12/29/2007
ohh...really really nicely written...*sighs* poor snape
Featherwish chapter 1 . 6/29/2006
Hm, isn't it "obsidian"?

Absolutely beautifully written, it is an absolutely beautiful piece. Very, very well done.
duj chapter 1 . 6/20/2006
King's pawn, first to move, first to die - well put. Good analogy. As Snape muses in my "Betrayals", ch 7, "Dumbledore might grant his followers a measure of mental autonomy that the Dark Lord denied but they were playing the same game. Just so might a wizard’s chesspiece be free to smash or stab the piece it took but not to choose the move."
TheDeathChamber chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
Wow. Intense.
Miko Kikyou chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
very good story! keep u p the good work!

MikoKikyou
MajinSakuko chapter 1 . 2/23/2004
I got goosebumps all over my skin Great One-shot!
Ophelia11 chapter 1 . 8/5/2003
This is such a great way to look at Snape's duel role... He's one of my favorite characters, and you really got his personality. I love this story!
MissMaryJane chapter 1 . 7/22/2003
i loved it!
Moria Polonius chapter 1 . 5/26/2002
It was so painfully bitter. But really believable. I can imagine Snape thinking all of this. Besides, you have fantastic writing style. Your metaphores, descriptions... I'm consumed with envy. Great job.
Allocin chapter 1 . 5/4/2002
Powerfully depressing, and very well written. I need to go read something cheerful now...
Ariana Deralte chapter 1 . 4/20/2002
Beautifully written. Well done.
RADKA chapter 1 . 4/6/2002
Such a lonely life,such a lonely the lone knight actually makes it to the end of the game.
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