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*'wow' look* Why do you always make me want to kill someone while reading this fic? I mean... perhaps the author of the fic..or some of the characters...or someone here.

WHAT WAS THIRTEEN DOING? DIDN'T SHE KNOW THAT THOSE BASTARDS WOULD DO SOMETHING LIKE IT? *facepalm* But okay, it'll be another week, so: YEEEEEEAAH \o/

And... wow, man. I really had forgotten about Remy's Huntington's. You've made it. I was totally 'WTFMAN' when I realized what the man was talking about. I'm still a little surprised, btw.

Keep writing and updating! Soon, please! There is going to be a week 2! I need it! Beijos!

Absolutely lovin' this story! Keep it coming

Viva o Intermezzo! So...hello Darth Vader/Sixth Sense Girl/Super-woman/boy/you/whateverIcallyou!

Hm... Like always, this chapter was fun. But... not the exciting fun, the thoughtful one. And I really loved it. It's so good to think someone knows that Cameron is deeper than some people (House) think. She's... human. And cute. And awesome (?). And cute. Have I said she is cute? :P

I don't know what to say, really. I'm hoping you make a HUGE final chapter, but I'm also hoping you make someone mess with them and they stay together for one more week. But what is the point? There will not be much more to tell... You're telling everything now! HAHAHAHAHAH.

Keep writing, Ayo, I'll be reading.

Beijos!

so...hm... I'm sleepy, didn't eat my freaking apple and wanted to kill you while reading this chapter. The reasons? *point at chapter* Do I need to explain something?

Well... I'm tired, you're tired (?) and I want to review it, because it's worth it, Darth Vader. De novo: muitooo boa a história! O capítulo! É quase impossível não se apaixonar pelas duas... por mais que não... vai, deixa quieto.

You're probably going to kill me for the Portuguese part but, well... *shrugs*

AND YOU HAD NO RIGHT TO DO THAT WITH CAMERON! WHEN YOU'VE ASKED ME ABOUT BEING REALLY EVIL I DIDN'T KNOW IT WAS WITH THAT! DAAAAAAAAMN. I'm never going to answer this kind of question again. NEVER.

E bela música! Eu fiquei escutando ela do começo ao final do capítulo (:

Beijos!

...*deeply thinking*

I KNOW I've read the beginning first... I know I was excited about it... annoying you about it... but now... WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME? YOY'RE PURE EVIIL!

It's a good thing that 13 found out what's wrong with Allison, but you don't stop a chapter like this - I need to know who those bastards are. I would have a clue if I was smarter, but you see, I'm wasting all my braincells trying to convince you that I'm not dirtyhead.

Hm... now that I know you work faster if I'm reading while you write, I KNOW I'll do it until this story ends, and I'm not gonna let you drop it as you did to The Unforgiving (btw, are you going to write more of it, since you've watched Tron?)

Uh... I think that's it. I'm SUUUUUUUUUPEEER excited about the next chapter and... maaan, it was super super cute the scene where 13 was WAITING Cameron's kiss. supersupersuper cute. I'm going to stole Cameron from you (:

Keep writing, manolo. I need this stuff.

Beijos!

Thirteen the human pillow! Very sweet moment there with Cameron that was completely ruined by Remy over thinking it.

Having them go back to the hospital was interesting. It was very well done with a sort of outsiders looking in prospective that reminded me of the first chapter where they were surrounded by people but were very much alone. The line "I just hope that's not how he gets all his epiphanies." was just awesome.

The finding their bodies thing was interesting, especially after the two suddenly got separated. It was a touch disturbing, which is good as having to search to find any dead body is strange but having to search for their own obviously goes beyond simply being strange.

*deep calming sigh* Ok, woman, now listen to me:

1) You had... well, right. But, FUCK, it's Cameron! Adorable, sweet, innocent Cameron! Only messed up- oh.

2) Awesome chapter... until you got me revolted by the end...

3) You were my hero when you said about Kutner (kutnerkutnerkutnerkutner), but know you're only a super friend because what you did to Cameron...

4) KILL JOSHUA! I LIKED HIM UNTIL WHAT HE DID TO THIRTEEN! GRRRRRRR!

5) Would you write more, pleease? *puppy eyes*

HDUAOAIDHAISODHAISHD. Awesome chapter, as usual, sweet. I'm excited about the next chapter, because since you've started writing this one you kept saying about chapter five. I'm really really excited (:

Beijos!

Aww, I loved that Remy gave Allison a hug and tried to be comforting.

There was a lot of research in this chapter. I learned more about the city reading this than I ever did watching House, though that is probably not surprising as usually my main concern when watching House is starring at Olivia Wilde.

Awesome battle scene here and I loved the finish of it with the absolutely necessary icicle. If a large fire breathing skeleton tiger wasn't cause to summon that I don't know what would be.

I do apologize for reviewing this late, distractions and too much time at work takes away from my time to read fanfics.

Looking forward to Day 4!

Hey, hello. Back here to... review, right? Ahn... *looks at chapter* As usual, great chapter, Corrupted. It was worth the wait. It always is. And, no, it doesn't suck. The readers count here, not you. I'm loving this fic, so keep writing. Or something bad will happen (I don't know what... not in the mood to think of anything).

Hm... have I told you this chapter is awesome? I mean... I know you've said that Cameron committed suicide, but still, I don't buy it. Something is wrong here.

And, dude, you're portraiting Thirteen almost as you are. You both don't know how to comfort someone. Ugh. But it's not like someone can fix that - it's just how you are (: *not a complain*

Keep writing, will you? I love this fic and I need an escape from reality sometimes. Don't let me down. And don't let others down too.

Besos!

Great chapter! I like that the interaction between these two remains solid even when a giant bear that is trying to kill them!

! I'VE READ EVERYTHING. Now give my cookies.

AYO, MAAAAN, THIS THING IS AWESOOOOMEEEEEEEEE! The the the... *faints* It's sooo good *-* I can't say what's going on because... because *looks at chapter and hugs it*

But now you'll write more (finish homework first U.U) so I can know WHY the hell Cameron is so mysterious about. Cameron isn't mysterious. WHO IS THIS CAMERON?

And, just for the record, Thirteen rocks. MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH. But she's a little... well, nothing. You're getting inside of her head, so of course I'll know everything about her. At least her, right?

SOON! POST SOON! WRITE SOON! I need this stuff! 'kay? Don't make me wait. You know how I can be a pain in the ass (I think..)

Anyway... KEEP WRITING! I fucking love the way you write.

Beijos!

CARAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA, ISSO É TÃÃO PERFEITO! Meean... In the beginning was odd and exciting, and when Remy found Cameron it got so... I don't know how to say it. IT'S SO FREAKING AWESOME!

And Remy comparing them as Batman and Robin and Spiderman and Black Cat! I laughed so hard when I read this that people around look at me as if I was crazy.

Write, write, write! I am so excited about this fic! For real. HAHAH.

Até!

Loved the changing dynamics in this chapter from Remy looking for Allison, to getting Allison to help her and then the battle which ends in the great celebration of a rather childish Remy! It is nice that Remy gets to sort of enjoy herself for a moment, even if it doesn't last.

Can't what to see what is next and how the week progresses.

CARALHO, ISSO VAI SER TÃO DIVERTIDO! You have no idea what I have been passing this few days - people cut off my internet! *cries* - so reading something as exciting as this is so much... I don't know. It's super awesome!

And I have double fun because I don't play any kind of RPG, so, before I read anything you write, I look up of what you're talking about so I don't get very confused... but, if you're covering all the basis, I don't need to be worried.. right?

HAHAHAHAH. keep writing, PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! This fic will be so much fun to me! And to others, but I can't know that.

Sorry for the first phrase . - couldn't help it.

Até mais!