Love this one.

this is amazing...i am too always wondering how was henry feeling toward jane after he got a passionate one before her...and this is one of the answer...thank you for this beautiful story

Great idea and thanks for writing.

Interessante Sicht. Ich denke auch, er hat von allen Frauen Anne am meistens geliebt, soweit er überhaupt zur Liebe fähig war.
Viele Grüße von Ines.

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This was just beyond amazing. Seriously. I love the fact that its written in a way that reveals how much King Henry is stewing in the regret and blinded love he has for Anne. As for Jane, she was not much of interest in my eyes but this one shot has shown a different light. i love it!

I'm with you on the whole I don't like Jane she seems so wrong for him she may of cooled the fire with him from Anne but she wasn't anything like Anne and if she had taken the time to know Anne I believe they could of been friends if not for Henry wanting to make Jane his toy but that's me and I liked it somewhat. I believe after his marriage to Jane he did regret taking Jane to be his wife because he missed Anne.

Wow, this is really good!

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hey, this was really nice! some typos and misspelled words, but the plot was great. loved Jane's musings about Anne and Henry's passion for her.

Yeah, I can't believe he ditched Anne either. I was completely UNWILLING to even think that he'd had he beheaded. But, history's history.

(And it sucks)

this was a great one shot...

l am in total agreement with you...

anne was a wonderful full of life and energy and to trade her for the plain jane,,, when anna could of been a great queen,,,

but oohhh no he went to jane and to the others to l believe never get true happiness...

also l believe it was guilt or a curse that anna put on him with that wound that is why it never healed as it was at the time he went to jane and left anna when with child

ohhh how l love this era,,, at least it made history interesting to read and watch...

please keep the writing up...

I must say that Cherry person is just plain rude and should look to her own grammar before insulting yours.

I mean come now, "You must actually be retard." that should be 'a retard' or 'retarded' and the chat speak I mean come on chat speak! I think teachers hate seeing that more than misspellings it's just as bad, if not worse than, poor grammar in their book.

I would also like to point out since I feel gravely insulted by Cherry's review that special education students ( S Ed. not being the class for children born with a mental handicap) learn the exact same things as everyone else in the school and just have more time to do the work and smaller class sizes so the teachers can give them more one-on-one help.

Her using such a comment as in insult along with the others she used just shows her ignorance as well as well as her bitchiness.

Anyway,

I have to admit you do have grammar and spelling errors, the spelling errors are nothing major and can be easily corrected with spell check, your major grammar error though is not the overuse of the comma (incorrect usage of the comma is quite common and is nothing to get upset about) but the fact that several of your sentences are not complete sentences but fragments.

That aside it is a good story a nice idea and I enjoyed it. Keep up with the wonderful stories and please continue writing for every story you write you'll only improve and grow as a writer.

I would like to apologize for the rant in the review but her comments just got to me. Keep up the great work.

Yawn, what a boring piece of crap! Lmao "she ravished the attention" shouldn't that be she lavished the attention! You must actually be retard. This in particular made me lol, "Jane clung to her explanation like a woman on a cliff and she sure felt like someone who is about to die" WTF, that's comedy gold! You also need to learn how to use a coma. Go back to school and learn with all the other special ed students. Your spelling/typing mistakes are ones made in primary school. You should delete this. If I was you I'd kill myself from the embarrassment!

P.S Stop creating your own reviews on anonymous. You must be retarded if you think people haven't noticed that all but one of your reviews are anonymous and the only signed account writes 'loved it' on everyone's story. LMFAO you're so pathetic! That's because everyone hates you, you sad little thing!