Im sure you've heard this time and again, but this is such a great story! I love how you show the differences between the tribes and the large difference in governments between Ishbal and Amestris. Fantastic stuff.

Sincerely,

Gatekeeper

So I just discovered this fic today- and I believed I might have seen it in passing in the past- or it could be just my memory doing things.

But I just wanted to say that I absolutely adore this fic-because I've been itching for like a near half year now for well thought out Scar and Roy interactions as a crucial part of narrative focus /delivery- so binging this made me feel like a cat dropped into a play pen up to the my knees on catnip.
especially all the interactions/ moments between Scar and Roy where they help each other out one way or another, which literally slay me alive and render me into a pile of goo, while the jokes and sarcasm and quips set me off laughing like a lunatic. Partly because I'm trash and I crack ship them, but also because i think you've both done a fantastic job of making me invested in this universe where the transition from Scar and Roy from Allies of convenience into something like actual friendship/foil brothers in arms. Specifically because there are so many believable moments of fights/arguments/scuffles, communications, and miscommunications, issues of trust, Aswell as an enduring effort to keep trying with all the challenges that are thrown at them, that it all makes me deeply happy to read about.

And that's just Scar and Roy, it doesn't even cover the the depth you guys have fleshed out Roy's relationship with everyone else, often with a wonderful counterbalance of brevity and complexity, (Havoc, Riza, elder Rehena, Grunnman, Gracia, literally everyone), as well as imparting the Politics and problems of trying to keep the safety of entire nations afloat.
Like just the sheer level of detail and richness you and your partner in crime imparted on world, custom, culture, language, accents, habits, food, and history, religion, teachings, tools, tribes, and conflicts to make your people of ishval. It's fantastic and I feel like I'll have to do rereads in the future to just understand all the meanings in the moments of this.

So regardless of what happens to this fic in the future- thank you for sharing it, cause it'll definitly keep as something of an inspiration 3

Ah yes, I remember this story. I read it a long time ago - one of the first FMAB fics I ever read. Indeed, I may say this was a phenomenal fanfiction. Reading this was a dream - I can't tell you how disappointed I was when the story ended. But here I am, reading it again! Enjoy, fellow readers.

I love this fanfiction so, so much. I really wasn't expecting anything so deep and philisophical. This fanfiction is more than a fanfiction, it's a lesson, and it's a shame not to finish it. I never expected to read a fanfiction that taught me something, and esspesialy nothing of this level, or anything so poetic. Thank you, and if you ever find the time or the desire to continue, I would so love it. Thank you again, and I hope to see you soon.

Please add at least one more chapter! I love this fanfic soooo much 3. I want to see Roy come home!

This story! 3

Awesome, awesome! I wanna know what would've happened if RoyJean had used the Stone, but there still was a huge chunk of it left!

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT!1111

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS FANFICTION OR WRITE A NEW ONE. THIS WAS THE BEST FANFIC I'VE EVER READ IN MY ENTIRE HISTORY OF READING FANFICTIONS (hint ive read a lot xd)! IF YOU DON'T CONTINUE IT, YOU HAVE 3 CHOICES! :C 1. Make a new one! 3 pls senpai. 2. Disappoint me (you dont wanna do that xd). 3. DIE. I MUST READ MORE! :OOOOOOOO

I know that this will probably never see another update again, but I have to say it is by far one of the best written fan fictions I have ever read. It is by far one of my all time favorites.

Mainly because I'm a sucker for blind Roy fan fictions but I just thought I'd let you know how I felt about this.

I do look forward to the hope you look back and decide to finish this at one point.

I really love the attention to detail in this story, it's honestly so well-thought out that I'm disappointed at the thought it might never update again! But thank you so much for the good story, if you ever do continue it, I will definitely want to keep reading :)

I love this story so much. I really hope that one day you may find the time to finish it :)

sigh, another great but dead story:(

I definitely agree with review before me, your story is so good and it flows so well! Please start updating again!

Oh PLEASE finish this! This is some of the most elegantly done world building that I have seen in this fandom!