Reviews for The Origins of Us
starlite22 chapter 16 . 7/21
Disappointed by the end after how chapters we had to wait for them to get back together, it was rushed and summarised, we go no proper chapter of them back together or the rest of the X-Men finding out? What happened to them next? Did they kids. After waiting so long there should have been proper them chapters like at the beginning before they lost their memories.
starlite22 chapter 11 . 7/21
Noo someone stole her paintings and sold them
starlite22 chapter 10 . 7/21
I hope they take the bullets out of their heads so they can remember each other.
Electus8 chapter 17 . 3/7
Absolutely loved it! Very well done!
sfstewart chapter 17 . 2/11/2018
Loved it
Kaylara chapter 17 . 8/19/2017
Heh! Remy's punishment was great!
thanks for a good story.
myharlequinromance321 chapter 17 . 11/18/2016
This was a roller coaster! Thank you so much for writing this and best of wishes to you:)
starlite22 chapter 17 . 5/17/2016
Great story, shame about the ending, it didn't really sort all the loose ends up, home you finish this Completly some day or add a sequel.
Emeraldbirch chapter 6 . 1/24/2016
When did you put up chapter six and can it be removed?
Emeraldbirch chapter 5 . 1/21/2016
I am enjoying this story. There area few thugs that infuse me though. Such as Wolverine telling Rogue she did good and then her turning around and askin why've didn't say good job, or Marie saying Love at the beginning of this chapter and the two mention that the end of the chapter is the first time that she says I love you. Also, I don't remember a time when Wolverine introduced himself.
Guest chapter 10 . 10/30/2015
I would really like to like your stories. It seems like you have some talent... but every single one of them I've looked at descends into Twilight worthy crap in the romance triangles with controlling and quasi non-consensual jerks.
753398445a chapter 1 . 6/26/2015
This certainly seems promising...
Brytte Mystere chapter 17 . 3/16/2015
I loved this fic (and will hate that swamp rat forever and ever).
Kay chapter 17 . 8/27/2014
You MUST continue the series, I love it!
Agoddamnlovestory chapter 17 . 8/25/2014
And with this story, you've made origins so much better! Too bad you're not around to do alternate versions of DOFP and the other wolverine movie. Oh well. This was amazing, and I'll definitely be rereading this in the future ;) 333
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