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I actually really like this story! Especially Sendonin this, he's actually not my favourite character but you've done really well with that! It's humorous and lively, i'm looking forward to future chapters!

OMG! Lol, I feel so biased. I AM. IN. LOVE. WITH. THIS CHAPTER. So sorry for not replying so long. THANK you. OMG, lol. -dies-

well written. great job. keep it up

awesome! very well written. loved the two plasma grenades Ippo throws on accident and he wins by one me cracking up in laughter.

Yay, never played Halo but I’m glad I requested it! ...Huh? You know when I first started reading I was like “What, is Ippo in ‘Nam?” yeah, ya got me.

Nice story, and longer is better, so keep it up! “that’s what she said”

- Peace!

Oh my gawd. It has been like two years since I've been in this fandom. And seriously, I'm really happy that someone had the time to make a story about my two favorite characters in Hajime no Ippo.

You know, I really like it. I like how you depicted Sendo, with the one-word-sentences and the swearing toned down compared to what he usually says outside the skull of his. xD It makes him look so tame and so cute! (Never said that word much, lol when describing a guy), Alex-san- ermm I mean Vorg (hate the name, ugh) is so moe here. And that was my problem. Lol. You made him too moe to not make readers take him seriously (the dog thing, lol). I appreciate it too, that you didn't do a bed scene. Hate things like that. I'm ok with shonen ai but yaoi I can't take. xD

I like the interactions and I loved the way you made these characters shine without the help of Ippo. I had been waiting for more Vorg (ok I'm really biased here, lol) fics for a long time. I'm glad someone had the guts to continue.

I'm really happy that someone at least had the time for this fandom. This fic was thoughtfully-written, heart-warming and a little nostalgic. What I didn't seem to see here though is the melancholy surrounding Vorg. I mean, he knows that he's going to leave soon right? I should've liked it more if you added more drama on that and broke our hearts straight-on. (LOL FANGIRL SCREAM)

Thanks for the fic. Hope you continue.

Hey that was really good. Hmm the only critic I have to encourage your nest chapter is… make it longer! And put Ippo in there damn it! And there really needs to be more fics for this somewhat neglected fandom. So write more. More I say! : )

Ps. If you like reviews enabling anonymous reviews makes it easier for lazy people like me : p