Reviews for Klon9
Guest chapter 7 . 2/2/2015
Hey , I really like your story I hope you finish, but geeze its been 3 yrs. Its 2015 now and its still didnt progress any further. But people have lives, and things to take care of. So hurry up and finish it, Kay ;D
BAMmwuhaha chapter 7 . 10/20/2012
This is great! Your story is wonderful, little statements you put in like "does the virus affect plants?" make it that much more complete and realistic. I haven't even come across a writer that has ever thought about the plants :D
I don't think you're going to continue this, are you? Seeing as the last update was last year. It's a shame, 'cause it's really good, just like your style of writing in this. Also, this is the first time I read a GrimmNel fic and I guess you made me fall for the pairing, they kinda fit together.
And seriously, I'm curious where Ichigo went, how Grimmjow is connected to the Z-virus (I have my speculations) and of how Szayel will react on Grimm (if doc. even still alive is).
cube V chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
Ugh, so I just read this all again because I really love the idea/setting. Its just so different! I'd love to see this completed, and I'm going to bug you until you do. Or just keep posting reviews... which I suppose would be a good thing.
cube V chapter 7 . 8/20/2012
I love this! Its so different than any other fic I've read. I love your writing style it feels more natural and flowy... lol 'flowy'... anyways I know its been awhile since you've updated.. and you very well may have abandoned this fic, but pleas update! Its awesome and 100% unique! :D
agoodcupoftea chapter 7 . 1/3/2012
This is pretty cool. I know you said you're outside of your element, but you're doing a pretty good job.

And no, I couldn't figure out the flaw in Grimmjow's escape plan. It went right over my head.

One thing I will say is that I noticed you likely don't proofread. I noticed very few errors otherwise, but I did see a lot of typos. Many were things spell check won't necessarily catch, e.g., "form" in place of "from". If you want help, I do offer beta for Bleach fanfics; I suggest at least that you do a very thorough proofread before posting. I did notice a few grammatical errors and such-mistakes with possessive forms, etc. I assume these to be an oversight akin to typos. You seem pretty intelligent, if I were to assume just by reading this. I think your worst problem is just typos.
VeelaSophia chapter 7 . 9/17/2011
YAY! I am SOOO happy! I'm excited to see what adventures happens to these two next. I also want to learn more about this Z-Virus. Thank you so much for updating! _
bloodraven1994 chapter 6 . 8/26/2011
more! :D
VeelaSophia chapter 6 . 6/26/2011
WHOA! That was some wicked awesome action! :D That was pretty cool. Nel is awesome, and so is Grimmjow, although I guess he didn't really fight as much as she did. So I'm slightly confused about the finger scan thing. So you have a scan and keys? Where would be the scan be? I didn't think this chapter was that bloody, so it didn't really bother me. But I thought this was pretty cool. Good job! _
VeelaSophia chapter 5 . 6/8/2011
Whoa. I don't even know what to say. This story is so freakin AWESOME! It has alot of creativity, and you use alot of description. You are a GREAT writer. I am so excited to see what happens next!
alphaladywolf chapter 3 . 5/19/2011
Grimmjow isn't exactly being friendly. I didn't really expect him to be polite, though.

I can understand why he wouldn't want to be an experiment.

He's (coughs nervously) going to escape when he is supposed to pee. Gross. Well, deperate times call for desperate measures.

Seriously? I know Grimmjow J. is resistant, but does the the security guard need a gun pointing at his back.

Did 'cat boy' accept that name? I guess it is usefull.

So, he escapes. Now, I guess I get why the guns were needed. Now that he's free, does Grimmjow J. & Neliel T. O./Nel meet?
alphaladywolf chapter 2 . 5/19/2011
Wow. The quarantine is really serious if they restrict the water.

So, Neliel and Ichigo Kurosaki were friends? Is he dead or missing. Is the truck crashing why she dosen't remember anything?

Yeah, it sucks waking up to a world full of sickness. I would think artificial limbs would make me more self-concious. It seems like she's a lab rat, but I know that's not the case.

Didn't our theatre coach say school's zombie survival club was a joke.

I'm glad you didn't kill Ichigo. But, you'd think he'd be the first person see'd she when she wakes up because he is her best friend.
alphaladywolf chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
"but I've had a combination of 3 inspirations for this fic. 1)Katy Perry's E.T.,"

Why am I not suprised. You really love that song.

I'm guessing Neliel T. O./Nel is the protagonist. She seems disoriented. I like how descriptive this is, but it's really short.

"Congratulations, kid. You've just survived the zombie apocalypse."

Yeah. Good ending. Makes me curious.
clow-san chapter 2 . 5/11/2011
You have a club that teaches how to survive a zombie apocalypse? That's way too cool.

I like the flow in here. The tech and all.
clow-san chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
Aren't you a prolific writer. God I wish can do this as well. I love the last line too. Reminds me of World War Z, or a book about Zombies.
Not nameless chapter 3 . 5/7/2011
Wait...I'm lost.

If the gun cracked the glass leaving him enough room to jump through, how can he crash through it? The glass isn't there! I must be reading it wrong. Something wrong with his plan? I must find it!
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