this is the most favourite fanfic i had ever read!
pls pls continue this story, i never seen a fanfic that don't have homunculus, amazing timeline and plot like your! Such a shame if you drop this.

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

I liked the concept of this story as well, I especially like that Edward wants to find his father. Al is adorable; I love that he's still in his own body! Reading about Edward and Al's missions is nice and it fills up their past very well. I'm curious as to whether they will find Hohemheim and what happens to them on their other missions, so I'm going to add this story to my alerts in the hopes that if you some day do rewrite this, you'll add a notice of the new chapters being up in this story as another chapter and I'll be then informed of the continuation.

Huh...to be honest, In the Brotherhood Anime, I think Edward always felt like he sort of killed his mother a second time.

Awwwww...I was hoping for the big, impressive save-the-random-alchemist's-life Practical Exam...

I'll say what I say when I see an awesome fic: WHY ARE WE NOT FUNDING THIS?

I support you forever! I will wait for you :D

Votes for Havoc acting as an older brother? I! Omg I need fanfics where Havoc is like that now XD *fangirls*

While I've only read the first chapter (so I'm not certain that you have not explained this in some other part of the story) I would like to point out that Edward lost his left leg to the initial transmutation, and subsuquently lost his right arm due to his bringing of Alphonse's soul back from the gate. However, the premise of the story seems quite interesting, and I encourage you to countinue.

Please UPDATE! Please!

Wow this is interesting!,!

woahhh! cool! i like your idea to make they still 12 and 11.. :D
and the way al act is more human then in anime/manga.

keep writing :D

Why is it that Mustang can happily burn photographic evidence of criminal activity and yet not a picture of Elicia?

In all seriousness a good chapter and I look forward to the now doubtless confrontation between Mustang and Ed!

Awww! That ending was cute! I love this.. I can't wait till Mustang confronts Ed about the transmutation...

Great story you got here! Please update soon!