| Reviews for Closure |
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The Celtic Dragon chapter 1 . 4/27/2017 Amazing work! |
dennalilly chapter 1 . 9/2/2011 I cried. This was so beautiful. Thank you so much. |
bloodorangeandvanillaicecream chapter 1 . 8/6/2011 somehow liked it... 3 |
renaissancefleabag chapter 1 . 6/10/2011 My goodness this was WONDERFUL. It was really good! You did a really good job on this one. I am sort of at a loss for words. It was truly heartwarming. Awesome job. |
Eliza-angel chapter 1 . 6/8/2011 This is a very sad but very beautiful written piece. I can't say much more- I'm lost for words. |
pepperonychanny chapter 1 . 5/15/2011 sorry for the long reading delays my life is very busy I haven't had time to write in almost two weeks i also hafta say for everybody who lost someone im glad he's dead yup power of SMacked is very strong you can really tell how much Stella loves that dear man i really loved the strong bond of Don and Mac especially since they both kno how it is to lose a loved one i enjoyed this scene they are soooo cute :) "I waited so long for this day," he utters in sorrow, his shoulders slumping and his eyes instantly watering once more. "I felt so angry and helpless for so long," he confesses in misery, his body just depositing his coat in a pile at his feet. Stella swiftly picks up the coat, tosses it along with hers over a kitchen chair and then leads him toward his bedroom. She eases herself down onto the soft covers and then invites him to come and join her. He takes off his suit jacket and just collapses onto the bed; Stella pulling the covers over them to ease the shakes his body wanted to offer once more. "Just let it out Mac, there is on one here but us." aaawwwww i miss these wise words of Stella on the show she almost had me crying here: "You don't have to," she assures him with a warm smile. "I love you Mac Taylor, with all my heart. When you hurt then I hurt. Tonight you need to cry and I am going to be here to cry with you. That's what we do; we take care of each other." This story was great and very emotional there is nothing in this story I didn't like... keep up the good work... and yay im starting to catch up again |
RFKrux chapter 1 . 5/10/2011 Poor Mac, this was a day that he really needed support, comfort, your best friend. And Stella knew it would be the one to give you that comfort and happy that she decided to stay where her belongs, NY, with his family and next to the man of her life. It seems that Stella was never in the life of Mac Taylor. It's like your best friend for a long time never existed. was deleted from your life. went up in smoke. this is very sad. Fortunately, we have you to keep this beautiful friendship alive. Thanks. Marguerite Krux |
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 5/9/2011 Wonderful story! Very moving! I really enjoyed it! |
e1981 chapter 1 . 5/8/2011 What a lovely little thing. It sure was a great day in history and I was kind of expecting you to write a little something to acknowledge it. Very sweet, heartbreaking, heartwarming and beautifully written! |
RobynBenson87 chapter 1 . 5/7/2011 AMAZING ! no other way to discribe it well done 3 xx |
Totorsg chapter 1 . 5/6/2011 WOW! amazing OS ! it's just perfect ! you did a great job with this. Stella is amazing to come back to be with Mac. they're so perfect together ! and this news was a good one. thanks my dear for this beautiful OS :) |
osarisanhur chapter 1 . 5/5/2011 Hi Sorry for the late review. I couldn't get on to review when I read it. Not sure if it was the site or just my comp. Anyway! I loved this story. It was sad and brought tears to my eyes. And I guess there are many people out there that felt as Mac did. Closure is always a good thing, and maybe now all these that lost someone (and those that didn't)can find some peace of mind knowing that justice has finally been served. I loved how Stella rushed to Mac on hearing the news. Poor Mac, he needed Stella so bad and thought she wouldn't come. He really should have a little more faith. And Stella promising never to leave again. If only! This was beautifully written, it tore at the heartstrings, and showed the mixed emotions that people share. I for one remember vividly that day, watching the horror on tv from the UK. Crying at the devastation and loss of life. This evil act was meant to devastate a nation, bring it to it's knees and render it useless in the fight against terrorism. Instead it did the opposite. The American people rose up, united by one common goal, to bring justice to those that lost their lives and never let the terorists win. And as they were joined by people around the world all ready to fight terrorism, that evil SOB must of felt the terror that he'd tried to inflict. It was he who went into hiding not the American people. And now justice has been served. I'll gladly wait for the next chapter of Beauty & the Beast in favour of reading this. Thank you. |
babygurl0506 chapter 1 . 5/4/2011 Couple days late reviewing, but holy damn! I love this! Wow. I did cry at the whole WTC moment. Ugh. You... you should storm CBS and be a writer for the show. |
phantom of the mental ward chapter 1 . 5/4/2011 That was absoultly beautiful! A happy sad! Now if only Stella really would stay! That was your best one shot ever! It made me cry, but don't worry they were happy tears! I LOVED THIS! You always write awesome stories! Keep it up! |
kaidiii chapter 1 . 5/4/2011 Excellent! Very nice Stella come do support Mac. Finally have closure Mac and all people who lost tragic day. Happy is Mac and Stella are together love each other and forever!Wonderful work! |