Reviews for Broken
Aphrael9 chapter 1 . 6/20
And this is why you are one of my favorite authors! Fred should be alive
DA Forever chapter 1 . 4/30/2016
Thank you so much for posting this. I think that it's so beautifully deep and really expresses what the DA really was, a teenage gang. I've read so many fan fictions saying how it's some sort of superhero group and other stuff and I'm normally like THAT'S WRONG! But this really moves my heart and really is a brilliant tribute to the fallen ones. You're a truly brilliant writer :D

But I hate you 'cause I'm now crying...

P.S: I love this but one tiny detail, on the seventh line it says blue eyes. I'm not sure if this isn't Harry or movie Harry but if your doing the book Harry then just a detail to look over. Aside from that PERFECTAMUNDO!
halfbloodmalfoyy chapter 1 . 3/13/2016
awh man. I'm all mushy now. great fic
Nadiafarjana chapter 1 . 1/12/2016
Beautiful
722alycat chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
i made you a sweater of my tears. i hope it fits you. :'(
Quill's And Parchment chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
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This fic has just cemented you as my second favorite author ever.
Only second to J. K. Rowling herself.
You are incredible.
Thank you for writing these wonderful stories.
xXMizz Alec VolturiXx chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
sooo good !
clumsydolphin chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Wow,you broke my heart with this story. You also gave me a story idea of my own, don't worry though because I don't write knock off's, if my story isn't unique, I don't write it. Anywho, thanks for the tears this time, I love a good cry fest, I'm such a girl, lol.
harmonious chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
That was beautifully written and i just had to leave a review even if I have you to blame for ruining my makeup before going out. Iv'e read stories with over 3000 reviews (am currently working on reading one of yours) and more than a few chapters but the emotion and true essence of Harry Potter has been caught by a oneshot. I lost it when he pulled out the coin, I can't really rationalize it other than I was touched. It was fitting to have him as the character, he embodies the hope of everyone and their struggles. Harry while he's the one everyone loves and admires he can never leave the pedestal people put him on. Neville is the unsung hero we can relate to, thank you for this wonderful piece that put our unoticed hero and my favorite character in the spotlight!
Diannika chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
I was reading this on my cell while eating, and had to stop because I was crying do much
aridnie chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
That was beautiful. Thank you.
Senecka chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
... just wow. this is so... awesmazing. you really brought story to life. i was crying the whole time. great job.

~Senecka
dumbledoresarmy101 chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
I love this, I was crying! I like the idea of the rock and I also like that it shows how Neville feels about their deaths... They will never die, not in my heart... -dumbledoresarmy101
IcestormisaNERD chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
Awwww I started crying.
Average Day For A Penguin chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
This really was good and well written. I had a lump in my throat while reading it you do know how to capture the reader !
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