| Reviews for Darkened Heart of Doubts |
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   SakuraKoi chapter 3 . 11/3/2016 i want more please |
| LavaLilly chapter 3 . 7/5/2016 Every freaking time |
| Elasour chapter 3 . 5/13/2015 Was it the noah, apocryphos or CROW that cross saw? |
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/29/2014 Please update a chapter it's really intresting |
| amberwolf chapter 3 . 5/9/2014 You could add Apocryphos and have Allen awaken as the heart sooner. Which would give an opportunity for more action or suspense depending on how you want it to go. By the way I love what you've written so far. |
| BluezebraAFHS chapter 3 . 1/25/2014 Wow, honestly, this story is really good. I didn't expect it to be like that when I read the summary. I really hope you update soon, I'd really like to see what happens next. |
| Nogizaka Ayumi chapter 3 . 12/24/2013 Hmm...has a good beginning...but they are too young to have feelings yet...so why not let Mana get killed and Lenalee taken away...Then they meet again...at the Black Order...Anyways, update soon! |
| Shad0wReaper133 chapter 3 . 12/20/2013 Looking forward to more chapters! I'm not sure which I'd rather have, but honestly It doesn't matter to me as long as its not Apocryphos. |
| Gen37 chapter 3 . 12/20/2013 Im glad you updated i would like to read more. And yeah, maybe you should add some noahs. |
| Nami Heartfilia chapter 2 . 10/22/2013 Hmmmm... How do you make such beautiful stories? Your stories are just too great! |
| untamabledragon144 chapter 2 . 3/19/2013 I'm very impressed with the prologue of this story. I can hardly wait for more! This is one of the few non-yaoi ones, so it'll be quite refreshing. Not that there is anything wrong with it, but one gets tired of the same old stories, rewritten. Anyway, good luck! And here's to hoping the next one isn't another two years off... |
| The Mad Puppeteer chapter 2 . 3/17/2013 Yay, it's finally been updated! I can't believe I still recognized this story after two years... I love this story and hope you continue on with the next chapter, preferably in less than two years, haha. Keep up the good work! |
| CrazyWolfDevil chapter 2 . 3/13/2013 please update asap |
| Perellow chapter 2 . 3/9/2013 I love the fact you've cut Lenalee's hair in order for her to hide. Smart move :P And I think you made a mistake with Allen's hair colour at the end of this chapter at "The young albino noticed that and reached up then held the other's hand, smiling to reassure the girl was safe now." Isn't he a brunette? xD |
| MercenaryCrime chapter 2 . 3/8/2013 normally, i wouldn't think of reading anything that pairs Allen and lenalee together but this is kind of cute C: hope to see more soon! |
