LISTEN I LOVED THIS STORY BUT BLU DIEING WILL MAKE I HARD FOR ME TO EVER READ THIS STORY AGAIN. IF COULD I WOULD GIVE MY SOUL FOR BLU TO LIVE. EVEN THOUGH I WOULD NOT BE ABULL T FIND LOVE IN THIS WORLD. BLU AND JEWEL ARE SOUL MATES AND IT IS VERY HARD TO FIND YOUR SOUL MATE UNLESS U FOLOW YOUR HEART( WICH BLU DID). BUT I WOULD GIVE MY SOUL SO THAT THEY CAN LIVE HAPPELY TOGETHER WITH THERE CHILDREN.
;_; GOODBYE MY FRIEND

:)

This story would of been great, only its too religious, i know you are and i respect it, but jewel and blu arnet, mostly due to the fact that blu is a nerd and always looks to the logical side, so sorry but i dont think you captured the characters' personalities well.

I've been reading this from the beginning and while it started out as a promising fic... Others have already bright up the fact that this could have been MUCH better.

I might have missed it but... why did Valentina hate them so much? What about the reactions of the others, the kids, Linda and Tulio? How did Esperanza suddenly become psychic? Even your writing style seemed to change in the last two chapters, it became... sloppier for lack of a better word. I don't mind the death of Blu, but still...

There are so many loose ends here and while I don't normally make reviews like this I feel it needs to be said. This is a good fic that ended poorly.

Despite the tragic events, I'm really loving this story. The way you write it leaves me wanting more.

It's also nice to have a main character die. I mean, howmany movies or books (for example) do you know where the main character(s) go through the craziest, unlikeliest or deadliest events, yet always pull through? And howmany do you know where they do not?

While I still somehow hope Blu will be fine, even though I know he won't be (cold body and all), I'm dying (no pun intended) to find out what happens next.

What a tragic but awesome ending?

well, while there still is a chance Blu is still alive,I request that any future stories that has a character die in it have a label that clearly states death fic. It makes it so much easier.

*dislike*, haha, just jk dude, what a sad ending. (

was the death of a main character really necessary? this leads to a lot of open-ended questions. How will Linda react to this? Does Jewel know her chest is open while she's flying her way home? How will Tulio react with Jewel's chest opened up like that?

This is sad, but I think Blu will rise again in the form of a zombie P. There are rare cases when people are presumed dead and go back to life. Of course I'm just pushing my luck if you plan to make a sequel P.

great story loved every minute of it, like eveyrone else i truly hope you don't leave the story on this cliff hanger, and either blu will return or will get to hear about the scene of jewel telling her family, however i did notice the complete sign so who knows.

great story, but the end is verry sad.

The death of a main character is really hard.

I hope for a good ending in the next chapter.

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*tears in his eyes* holy...he had better not be dead or I will hunt you down. I would also like to know what happened to the male macaw.

So much emotion. Great job.

Dude, i have to say im impressed. You seemed to stay true to your ideas. Disregard that last PM i sent you since you have made your decision alreadry. btw, Y did you kill Blu! me and him are so much a like. anyway good ending, but i really hope Blu isnt really dead. Hopefully soon youll see what kind of fight scene i can create in my story Storm job. Next chapter soon please!

Please tell me that you did not kill Blu, that he will somehow recover! The death of a main character would be most distressing. Please do tell me the next release date! XD

An awesome and spooky chapter, with an amazing cliffhanger to boot!