kinda sad at parts, but i loved it

Wonderful

Siiiiiigh. I keep reading your stories and wishing they would never ever end. Please don't EVER stop writing Heroes stories. Hell, I'd read ANYthing you write. You're brilliant. I'm slowly making my way through your body of work (here on FF). The only thing I noticed is that, a few times, you've spelled 'too' as 'to'. Usually that would really bother me, but with you, I can't seem to care. You're just too amazing.

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Wow! I don't know what else to say, you've rendered me basically speechless.

The way you capture the loneliness, the missing piece Gabriel/Sylar felt, how long eternity actually IS and really just Gabriel in general was just: WOW.

This was a really sad, intense fic and it was well worth reading. I'm glad you put that ray of hope at the end with the "spark of hope" that he had and I'm only assuming she felt as well. Beautiful piece, nothing else to say. :)

awesome,sad and sweet

love this. very well written.

beautiful!

God, this was so gut-wrenchingly sad. The weight of eternity bore heavily on their shoulders, did it not? It took decades to realize that they are nothing without each other.

This one-shot was beautifully written and Gabriel's anguish was perfectly depicted. Great job!

such a moving piece, i absolutely adored it!

INTENSE. Wow, I don't think I breathed through the entire story. The way you described the apathy and nothingness of spending eternity alone was very poignant. When Gabriel couldn't even bring himself to feel enough emotion to miss Claire, I knew he was really far gone. I'm glad the ending had that "spark of hope" for the two of them. Thanks for sharing! :)

Of course I have to review this beautifully touching piece! I think you are spot on in terms of capturing immortality as constantly being a routine. It seems cold, lonely and pointless without someone else to live for. I swooned at the line where he admits traveling out of his way just so he can see her for a few seconds and he felt lost when she stopped showing up. Although really Claire leave a guy a note, he obviously isn't here to feed the birds. :) I am glad in the end she was there when he needed her. Maybe a companion piece? Pretty please! Also excited for Level 5 installment!