Wow, this must be one of the longest chapters I've come across. But that doesn't matter to me, I'm here to read and review a story and that's exactly what I'm going to do. Let's get into it.

I like that you have Mauro returning as the main antagonist. Most other stories I usually read have him become friends with Blu and Jewel, so I appreciate that you took that route to create something more original.

The story you've created for how Nico got his iconic bottle cap was great, probably the most creative rendition I've seen yet. Let's hope he can be saved soon.

The scene with Maurice, Mauro, Roberto and Miguel was hilarious. Your humour is spot on with these stories, just with the right amount of comedy and seriousness.

This was really intense, and i absolutely loved it! I'm about to read the sequel:)

Harmony Jasmine Cheryl Chyanne Avery:(a 15 year old kookaburra kiwi hybrid with brown feathers and eyes and black plumage with red stripes, born on November 14, 2001)Hey, Red. We've been friends for a while, so I baked you a pie.

Red:Looks good.(eats the pie)Mmm! It's delicious! What's in this?

Harmony:Some apples, some cinamon and Ruby Cardinal's hair.

Red:What?

Harmony:Ruby's hair was in the pie. Can you feel her? Inside of her?

Red:Yeah, I guess.

Epic story. Though very brutal.

This story is just plain amazing. I can't tell how much I loved it! I love how descriptive you were with almost every thing. You explained every little detail that you could possibly find to explain. The scenes were filled with suspense, excitement. I instantly felt like I was in Pedro's position. At parts I would laugh but then the laughter turned into a frown with my chest feeling tight like I was going to cry. Which I almost did at Nico's nightmare where he had died. I thought that was the end of the story. Until I realized that wasn't the end. If I didn't realize that I would of been crying myself to sleep. Overall, This story is just...I don't have any words. I haven't gotten through the whole series but I will. I bet it's going to be like a roller coaster ride.

OMG I LOVE IT ITS SOOO CUTE!

Very radical. ;)

P.S. To PrairieRose1017, I did split up Chapter 2, it was so long. You were close. I got nine separate chapters. Just throwing that out there!

Skye (Again)

Wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow! You are so talented! The best Rio story I have EVER read, no joke!

I totally love Nico, and I pasted this entire story on my laptop to show my friends. And I rarely do that.

Could you possibly write about Nico and Pedro's past? Like, if they got orphaned, how they met each other and Pedro, why they love samba, the works. Please?

Skye

Awesome story! Must have taken ages to finish! Sorry this isnt a long review like you demanded.. I mean asked, but still, might as well get to the chase.

Nice story. Poor Nico! How do you kill that Maurice!

Very nicely done! It took me forever to finish just because of the INSANELY long second chapter that could probably be like 6 if you were to break it down, BUT I loved it none the less. The suspense almost killed me at the end, along with Maurice living...again... ;) Well done! I'm excited to move on to Seeing Double.

omg i was crying the hole time after i herd the nightmare that Nico had then i was crying cuz you had me thinking it was actually going to end like that, but you did it again and pulled him through.;) i cry at the end when i read about Nico and Pedro reuniting but i was happy crying :,) but does the ending the real ending mean your going to make a new one? any way good story only the really great stories can make me cry i have noticed. in fact i was so sad that even though i was listening to a song i knew all the words to i just couldn't sing it with out breaking down in to tears. well i have put to much thought in to this already so im boring you so im going to stop now lol bye. ;)

OMG I almost cried that was soo sad I was desperatly hoping that dang monkey would die! Darn!

ONTO THE SEQUEL!