Oh, I enjoyed it a lot! Great in-sight look into Mac's thought on Jo. There was no question for me that this scene from "NfS" was veeery important in summing up their relationship but I kinda lacked some sort of Mac's thoguht about it on the show. So THANKS for writing them!

I can totally believe your version, your idea. I can see Mac being all "What's going on?", analizing Jo's influence on everyone and everything, including himself.

But I sincerely hope you'll write more of them, won't you? YOu certainly understand this couple and their dynamics, I hope we'll see more of your work.

I hope you're planning to continue this. The dynamic between Jo and Mac is awesome, and I can totally picture him trying to figure out why he let her tell him what to do.

Love it,please continue.

Hurray for real life but boo for us! :D

Awesome, especially with the way you have him questioning how she has clicked with everyone on the team. But especially him, I think she gets him out of the office to quit wallowing and hopefully get a life outside of the office because that isn't a bad thing for Mac. :) He needs to realize that there is more than work out there.

One thing that I did note in here is her fashion tips to Adam...could we see a quick oneshot with that please? I would LOVE to see what he needed help with. :D Fantastic job!

Very nice! You've captured their relationship quite well. That scene was rather remarkable. Mac just doesn't let himself be taken care of in any way, yet... Jo obviously means a lot to him. I imagine his relationship with Claire was much the same. The bantering. The caring.

Great job!