Ah, so it seems like they really hit it off tonight and that they have great potential to be a band. It seems like they've already got some fans, which is good. Haha, Light is embarassed 'cause he has to call home to let them know he was okay and where he was going.

Oh yes Lawlie... call it a hunch. It's practically written on the guitar who Light is. I can't wait for Light and Lawliet to meet! Those two would have made the besteset of friends if they had been in different circumstances.

Ya know, after a few chapter this actually seems pretty intresting! Very intresting indeed. So, the idea of Lawliet being in a band is something I haven't read before so it makes it all the more intresting to read this. I wonder is Light is gonna encounter this un-debut-ed band and join them. That would be cool :)
I never even knew of the songs in the last chapter you gave us existed until I read it! I like it, actually. And this is coming from a girl who also listens to Selena Gomez and Lady Gaga. Two of my favorite singers. So anyway, this story has got some potential!

plannedbyReaper Light,

This fic isn't too bad. It's good enough that I've read all of it so far, and I'll keep reading the fic to the end, but I can still tell that this is one of your earlier fics. You've improved significantly since this one, and I can tell too well.

You get a whole load of points for the humour and the fact that it's a metal band fic, but the use by Light of the noun 'dildos' as an adjective is completely off the mark somewhere. It's jarring and horrible, actually, worse than the exaggeration of his god-complex (which I'm forgiving because, in Light's words, it's 'Freaking A').

Meanwhile, I'm gonna have to check back to make sure that Taro Kagami really did write Death note in the pilot chapter, and not the random author on the panel show who didn't get killed for the simple reason that he was using a penname, as first assumed. By the way, for an even better piece of meta-humour, go onto wikipedia and search a mangaka named 'Shigeru Mizuki', the guy famous for 'Ge Ge Ge no Kitaro' - you will see what I mean, and probably like it too.

As I'm working towards writing a 'metal band fic' for Death Note myself, I may have to raise my game with it and have it, in some way or another, completely trash yours. Yes, this is fighting talk, and if you want to check out the info on it that the general public already has, it's mentioned on my profile under the name 'White Apples'.

Thanks for giving me the worker's spirit!

Ruin XXX

Death note is ownd by him? I thaught it was obata ... Ir sumthin, cut i thaught that guy was bleach' s owner

Don't you just love that family of tigers? They make me smile whenever they're mentioned :)

Epic as always :D

More please!

This is so much fun to read! And the LxLight-ness is awesome, especially seeing as crack-L can be more insanely possessive.

YEAAAHHHH

This is f/riff/ing hilarious. I can't wait for the slash...

I love you xD seriously, you're my idol. This had me laughing so hard I could barely breathe. Thanks for the awesome chapter!

HAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA! Death Note guitar... .awesome!

*rushes out to get custom made Death Note guitar*

Eye of the Tiger... XD

Again, I am loving this, it perfect in it's hilarity.

Ha! Great chapter; it was absolutely hilarious, as usual. Oh dear lord, the crack. It kills me. I was grinning the entire way through this.

"To L's annoyance confirming it was a guy did nothing to discourage the idea of 'I'd hit that,' though that would be, by definition, gay." - Loved this line in particular.

And this bit - "Mikami began groveling and apologizing profusely but Light was no longer there. It seemed he had been suddenly tackled from behind by a crazed Wildman who snapped him in handcuffs at lightning speed." Ha ha, that makes for a great mental image. The way you write makes it so easy to imagine.

Thanks for updating! I really loved it. Just one thing - all the riff censoring, while funny, can get a little distracting on the eye and tends to disrupt the flow if used too much. I can't tell if you're doing it partly because the real word's too offensive or just for the sake of crackishness (I'm guessing it's the latter), but you might want to consider either just writing 'fuck' if that's what you mean or finding another word. 'F/riff/k' is a bit jolting.

But whatever. It's a tiny matter that probably doesn't bother anyone but me and my lazy reading eyes, and this story is pure golden crack whether it says 'f/riff/k' or 'fuck'. Thank you so much for sharing this! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

Baha, love!

Thanks for another awesome chapter! :)