Well, overall this was pretty cool kinda different from other stories but not bad.

Well that wasn't bad I guess main focus is on Saya and Kohta so not really interested in this much no offence lol

Well, that was pretty cool

Oh, just realized I never reviewed this story.

This was the first fic I've read from you. Probably one of the best decisions I've made in my life :P

Thanks for the unexpected amazing story

Love the story; love the descriptive writing style.

It felt a little rushed in certain areas (as in, it felt like at time it was "this happened and then this happened")

Overall, I think you did a good job, but I feel like the T rating might be a little weak xD (read, I feel this should be borderline M)

This review will be directed at the entire story, and not just this chapter. My apologies, I would have reviewed the first two individually, but I got so caught up with the story line that I could not stop reading!

Let me start off by saying that this is the first fan fiction I've read that was written by you, Draco38, and I would like to commend you on your extraordinary story telling skills. I cannot begin to imagine how big of a challenge it must be to write a good story such as this.

I really feel like you did an excellent job at retaining each charactor's personality as was shown in the Anime, and I LOVE the character development you displayed.

Overall this was a really good short story, so I thank you and your supporters for creating this, dare I say, piece of art? Yes that's exactly what I'll call it.

I cannot wait to start reading the sequal to this story, in fact, I think I will start reading it now! XD

I wish you all the best!

Kind regards,
Johan

Definitely a good approach to a 'what if' scenario that had good character and relationship development.

Oh my god. This ship! Always loved it.

Also, your writing is amazing. The way you make it so much like the anime, ITS AMAZING! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!

if u had killed kohta i would have found a way to send you to the 13th level of the deepest prison of hell,

but since you didnt...

WOO HOO kohta got laid before takashi, who would have seen that coming
KOHTA IS GOD now takashi needs to drag and claim his powerful samuri

This was yet another good and very well written High School of The Dead fic though I admit I watched the anime so far I intend to read the manga but I take it from the stuff I read so far that you're a big Kohta/Saya fan right?

This is an excellent fic. The writing, story, and characters are very well done. Looking forward to more.

Loved it! :3

Amazing story. Really glad to see a sequel on your page. Great taste in music too lol.

Sorry I didn't do a review for the last chapter like I said I would but, I was rather gripped by the story. First of all thanks for the reply and clearing that up for me. Second I disagree with you saying that this is rougher than your newer pieces, certainly it's clearer that your writing style is different but, I don't really see it as a lesser quality. As for the story itself I love it and can't wait to read 'Living with the Dead' I'd ask you is it a direct sequel but, i'll be reading it before you reply! I really like the development of Saeko/Takashi and Saya/Kohta I wonder what you'll be doing with Rei in this next piece?