Aww so cute

In answer to your question, "Who thought this was going to be dirty?" Not me. Was it supposed to sound dirty? Or am I just that naive? I love the story. SO CUTE! I love this shipping!
Eternal Twilight

Hee, hee. I was looking at your stories and read this one last 'cause I don't normally read dirty stuff. Then I thought 'Eh what the heck.' and read it. Glad I did.

It's cute :

Aw... How cute. Paul was kinda OOC in my opinion, but it was so adorable!

Ngaww Kawaii! That was very cute!

I loved the humour! Silly little Dawn! Silly big Paul!

Anyhoo! Very cute! Very sweet! Good work Waveripple! Keep it up! I love your stories!

it's good...BWAHAHAA i always love the plot of cherry stems. omg i'm not the only one who makes shapes out of jolly ranchers o.o and it takes me a longer time to chew it down...

Not me. Anyway, I thought this was hilarious. Keep up the good work and keep on writing.

-Moonlight's Shadow Warrior :D

Okay, i will admit, i thought it would be dirty! Really Funny and great story!

*smirk smirk* Me. Totally and completely me. You know me so well.

Haha, I couldn't even picture them doing a cherry stem making a heart out of it nor doing it with a jolly rancher. Pretty hard imagining Paul to do something like that, lolz.

Not really...

LOL, Paul kissed Dawn and then realized what he did...

Another good oneshot.

5 spelling mistakes, might want to watch out for those and proofreader before you upload or something, because they're somewhat distracting.

You are quite good at oneshots, I need to try one sometime.

Wahhh! Loved it! Haha, actually when I saw the summary I thought that you were gonna make that part sound dirty but then turn it into something wonderfully fluffy! Again, loved it!