Reviews for Test Of Humanity
ColonelJayWrites chapter 6 . 6/3
"Who'll pack on the pounds? Again, stay tuned to find out."

(wheezing in the background)
ColonelJayWrites chapter 5 . 6/3
I love your author's notes. Been a while since anyone's writtenStay tuned to find out!" Bloody hillarious.

Great fic so far, will be stayin' for a while. :D
Guest chapter 8 . 3/31
Nice chapter
Guest chapter 8 . 3/30
Yes I love the idea I also thought about Wheatley being chubby
The Switching Expert chapter 18 . 12/26/2019
I knew I’d love the rest. And I did! Can’t wait to write one of these myself
The Switching Expert chapter 9 . 12/26/2019
I’m loving every bit of this! This especially made me laugh. Can’t wait to read the rest!
TigerKei chapter 1 . 10/18/2019
Hey! Just wanted to say I wrote that fic! This is T.K btw- I just wanted to say thank you for inspiring me, and hopefully you see this message. You are really a gifted author and I hope someday you write again, I’m thinking of drawing some fan art of this fic!
T.K chapter 1 . 7/31/2016
I've really enjoyed this fic! So much so that you've inspired me to write my own! So I just gotta say- thanks! And to you I wish a happy future! :D
en Aspie Esq chapter 1 . 4/1/2016
This is how you write a fetish story, assuming this is one. You introduce it in a way that isn't brutally offensive to the reader, or requires having a fetish to enjoy it.

On another note, the characters are dynamic, for the most part, but I find a bit of word redundancy. Overall, 7.5/10
SapphireBryony chapter 7 . 1/14/2016
OH GOD. Please tell me someone has illustrated this chapter. Please, it's for science.

"Huh. He'd have to figure our what he was supposed to do with that later."

*snickers childishly* I'll just *bet* you will, Wheatley...
SapphireBryony chapter 6 . 1/14/2016
I love that Chell recognized him half for his accent and half for his general idiocy.

If I have one criticism of this story, it's that it seems to be moving awfully quickly. Jake went from "Whoa, should he be locked up?" to "Hey, he can sleep on your couch, right?" in about 12 seconds. I understand Chell would agree just to keep an eye on him, but some of it did feel a little rushed, like maybe the story could have benefited from at least another few paragraphs in there.

Anyways, onwards!
SapphireBryony chapter 3 . 1/14/2016
Oh god, Wheatley's rendition of the coconut song was the best.

"'...um...ones that fit in your head.' He then shut down once again."

perfection
Guest chapter 13 . 4/16/2014
GIVE ME A WHEATLEY PILLOW X3
Guest chapter 6 . 4/16/2014
Weight gain? :3
Guest chapter 3 . 4/16/2014
OH MY FUCKING NOVA
"Who stole my cheeseburger?"
I JUST DIED!1!
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