Loved it :)
Make one about Helena and lion!?

I loved it! :)

wow I really enjoyed this! I don't see how you don't like it!

Damn that was pretty intense! I can't believe how well you had Ada down that was really hot down to her saying "Don't temp me, handsome" that sounded like her!

A c**k ring sounds really painful though I gotta say but i can understand Leon's position in a way. By the way, i've read a couple of your stories like Ada playing skin flute on Leon in the theatre and the one where Claire pegged him, and though I personally would never under any circumstances do something like that (I just feel like I'm the cord a woman is the outlet other that Im pretty open minded)

Still that gave me an idea, would you ever do one the other way, like I guess the normal way? I mean anal but with Leon going in Claire? Or Ada for that matter, Ada seems more like the type that would be open to that sort of thing.

She has that freaky spirit aspect to her. lol. I mean whichever character has the nicest booty but I'm open to either one I'm an A** man and any true one thinks back door action is naughty as hell but hawt.

Not like a porno either, just like realistic, and maybe even just have Leon and Claire or Leon and Ada have vaginal first, then anal (Obviously the other way around is not logical as even doctors say its the other way that should be done 4 health reasons)

Not officially requesting like the person that requested this but that would be really hot if you did write something like that I think I have yet to see that with opposite sex couples but contrary to popular belief its not gay at all and straight couples do that too.

Then again, it'd also be cool to see Leon and Ada and Claire! lol.

then again you''re the author you're the boss just saying i only ask because i like your stories its a lot more descriptive than many of the authors on here and while I dunno if Leon would react like he would, i mean who knows but Ada i think you have her spot on.

Damn though Ada really teased him! Closing up i just thought I should let ya know you are one of the authors who inspired me to write what will be my first Leon/Ada lemon actually...my first lemon period!
Happy writing :)

Nice story for a one shot

only one word to describe the story : HOT.
Love it,specially when Leon begging to Ada,hahaha.
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Cute and hot..!
I loved Leon x Ada

This is delicious and oh-so-hot. Your characterization of Ada is perfect. Leon begging is so adorable (well, maybe that's not the word for it.) I absolutely loved it.

Always good to count on Ada to be a tease monster. XD Nice job on the story.

This was so hot! Love Ada topping Leon.

that hot situation! I love Leon and Ada together, thanks!

Another well written story from someone who is rapidly proving themselves to be a master. :-D

I really enjoyed this, although more than the author did, I think. Lol

Still, if you're not wholly happy with this and it's a great story, I look forward to reading one you are happy with because I know it will be even better!