Reviews for A Part of Me
Cerasifera chapter 29 . 3/2
Hmm. A rather open ending, but at least there's hope for one Snape. I just hope that their experiences with his younger self (and witnessing his death, and witnessing the aftermath of his older self's torture) have soften the Gryffindors up a bit, so that they're more accepting of him now. What's the point of surviving the war if he still ends up alone and miserable?
Cerasifera chapter 20 . 3/2
Oh no! I had such high hopes for him :-(
Cerasifera chapter 15 . 3/2
Now I really want to strangle Kirby.
I've had a teacher lowkey accuse me of plagiarism bc I'd used some obscure phrase he didn't think kids my age used (wrong, old man), but since he couldn't prove it of course, my grade was safe...
Cerasifera chapter 11 . 3/2
Yeah, I don't believe for a minute that Harry would stoop that low to begin with.
What a load of wasted opportunities to not repeat old mistakes.
Cerasifera chapter 9 . 3/2
Another weird timeline example. Lucius is 6 years older than Severus, so they only went to school together for one year.
Cerasifera chapter 8 . 3/2
Oh, I like these two together - they're probably the only ones who can fully appreciate each other's intelligence, Hermione finally gets a chance to pick Snape's brain, and the theory about why Snape ignores her sounds valid...
I do hope he learns a few things from her, too.
Cerasifera chapter 7 . 3/2
Okay, now he's being silly. If he's really that knowledgeable on werewolves, he knows they're harmless in human form, so no need to freak out now.
Also, he *knows* that he's missed 20/22 (depending on which part of the timeline you f'd up lol) years of innovations, so how is hearing about something new in any way insulting?!
Cerasifera chapter 3 . 3/2
I must say I'm especially disappointed with Harry's reaction. This is a few months after he saw in the Pensieve what his father did to young Snape and we know he felt terrible about that, because he knows very well what it's like to be bullied. Now he has a chance to - after finding out if the Levicorpus incident had already taken place for this young Snape or not - at least apologize to Severus for the way his father and his friends treated him... and all he does is narrow his eyes and bump into him?

But the rest of the student body too - you have this young but bitter teacher who no one can figure out, what could be more fascinating than the opportunity to get to know his younger self? Instead they punish him for stuff he hasn't done yet, sheez

And who will pull him apart to tell him where he went wrong the first time around? A kid this smart must have had higher ambitions than school teacher and Head of House - he must be wondering what went wrong.
Cerasifera chapter 2 . 3/2
This is hilarious so far, but I don't understand your timeline. Severus came from March 1975, that bunch graduated in 1978, so Spring '75 is the end of his fourth year, before the fight with Lily, but also before the Shrieking Shack murder attempt. Then what's he doing with Advanced Potions and the sixth years? If Hermione shows anything, it's that high-gifted students do not get an adjusted programme...

Man, I hope this young Severus gets a better shot at life.
Erimenthe chapter 29 . 10/9/2018
This was a brilliant take on the de-aging theme. I'd love to see what happens next and how things change for Snape with the people in the order and at Hogwarts. I'm glad that Snape and his mom got to reunite in the end and I'm sad that Severus had to die that way, though for him I can see him rather going that way than just fading or decompiling or whatever. That would be too ignominious a way to go for him. Too bad there couldn't have been a way to incorporate the two back together or for Severus to continue as Snape's son perhaps, but I suppose his living wouldn't have had the same impact on Slytherin House alums or children, or Lucius, as it did.
Guest chapter 29 . 2/19/2018
I just want to say that I absolutely love this story. I've read it multiple times and it is the most believable "de-aging" Fic I've ever read. Don't suppose it would be too much to ask for a sequel? I'm absolutely DYING to see the changes to canon you've set up.
Guest chapter 29 . 12/16/2017
Sequel?

Would love to see Snape, Malfoy, Eileen and Dumbledore, along with the kids...
bridgeportfox chapter 23 . 3/31/2017
Molly will have Ron's hide in the morning. Severus certainly is having a hard time. Looking forward to finding out what happened to Snape.
bridgeportfox chapter 20 . 3/31/2017
Darn. They made it through the year, were looking forward to summer and now this. At least they seem to be starting to let their emotions show for each other.
bridgeportfox chapter 16 . 3/31/2017
Aww. I was hoping that the curse had something more painful in store for Kirby. Though I am glad for Hermione and Severus.
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