I hope you continue! It was a great first chapter!

Love this! Definitely going on the read again list.

I absolutely adore this pairing and love your style of writing. Keep up the amazing work and I would like to see a follow up chapter maybe. :D

Cute story.

Awwwe i could so see this happening

I love this so much. I didn't want it to end. Beautifully done. :)

I really enjoyed this. I wish it was more than just a one shot. Would make a great begining to a story. :)

So sweet! I like this story a lot. Very well written

Love it!

Good. About bloody time somebody wrote a proper end to that damn show!

This was really fantastic.

I loved the way they were both handling the situation - as sensible, reasonable people. No hysterics or freak outs. Makes a nice change from a lot of stories.

My favourite parts: the point that was made that they weren't really as drunk as they made out; they were just using the alcohol as an excuse to do what they wanted

and when Rory said she didn't love the book because Jess wrote it. She loved Jess because he wrote the book. That was epic!

Awww love it! Great story!

Loved it totally deserves a sequel. :)

AMAZING! if this happened then everyone would have reacted just the way you described it. Rory and Jess are perfect... Btw, why is this a one-shot? I WANT MORE :D

Love it please contienu