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Im going through a tough time right now but thank you this is making me smile and laugh.

Thank you for writing this story. It was cute.

But it has the usual cliches with the annoying Alice, strong but weak Bella, and I do have to say I love your Rose. I hate how everyone make her the standoffish bitch, but not you, you gave her personality and that was truly amazing.

Well done!

Great story. The epilogue of sorts provided a closure. Thank you.

so this is ridiculously stupid. bella was willing to and has had words
with the king of england and fought with him to protect her and edward's
relationship. now, there is irina and tanya. she was having a panic
attack because of irina and all nervous about her and other girls/tanya.
this is completely idiotic. who is more intimidating? more powerful?
king of england? or a princess wanna be selfish, bitchy brainless
gold digger girls? and bella has problems with the girls after she had
gone one on one with a king? she or the author is trying to cause
drama where there should not be and i am not impressed by it.

just wondering how bella expect a prince, heir to the throne
to live in a small house that she can afford just b/c of her
damn pride. she is a commoner not in just a social status
but in her thinking...she thinks the kind is closed minded...
so is she. she's just as much a snob as he is...but against the
wealthy/royalty.

just thought of something. as a prince of england, i would think
he would have several body guards. i dont remember reading about them
at all?...

Tense jump and point of view jump from 3rd person to first.

You jump tenses a few times in the middle from past to present.

i loved the whole story! absolutely wonderful!

thank goodness!.. i thought Sophia and lucas were gonna be together! .. I imagine Edward's reaction to that would have been halarious, though.. XD

Just finished the story and wanted to tell you that I thought it was wonderful. I'm assuming you're American because of some of your word choices and the fact that you didn't throw in those extraneous u's in certain words like favorite. If you are, I think it's interesting that you followed the real life story enough to be able to write this.

You did a great job of not only writing this, but with the pacing and throwing in plausible scenes as well. I hate it when writers throw in unrealistic drama or when they go from one thing to the next too quickly. I especially liked the very last chapter. I love it when you guys do that. As a reader, I'm so invested in your story. It's nice to get that flash forward and see how they all turned out. Get some closure. Thanks for sharing.

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Your story was really cute I really enjoyed reading it