SO EMOTIONAL *crys uncontrollably* But awesome story!

Paws? Birds don’t have paws!

This was a pretty good story, sad at the end, but good!

Really good. I LOVE this story, although the end is a bit sad.

man,i loved your story bro.

i wish you will write more story in the near future about rio

Super Uber fantastic! Great use of word choices and bravo the character's realism. A satisfying ending for this story.

hope you come up with something nice like that last one, how about Alice and Chloe comes to Rio to find Blu while Blu and Jewel are busy sharing their love, and involves Blu's friends backing him up and (or) Blu trying to make them friends and they stick around for a while.

how about that?

p.s love your story.

I liked the story overall, some parts more than others. In some of the authors notes, i thought you had given up a little bit too much of the ending, but in the following chapters, you proceeded to surprise me with a few unexpected twists in the plot. It was well played, in chapter 8 for example, the initial section lead me to believe the story was taking one path, when all of the sudden it flipped at the last second and a new conflict arose, which surprised me to the point where I actually stood up and said "thats was a clever bit of writing right there!" However, i do have a bit of a grievance in the end of the story. The climax came fairly late in the story, and then the story ended quite abruptly. The resolution was there, but since the climax was so close to the end of the story, it felt like the last two chapters were very rushed and it left me with a bad feeling about the story. I'm not quite sure if it was your intention or not, but to end the story with such a major event made it feel like a cliffhanger, like you were writing more. The story itself though was extremely well written, very good grammar and a solid plot made for a very interesting story that i could stop reading once I started. Again, nice story, and im looking forward to reading more from you!

Don't worry it's great. But I'm sure you heard it before. :P

This has to be the best Rio fanfic ever! I reviewed more then 10 other people's stories and yours are the best ever! Great Job!

I know tons about Guardians of Gahoole. Maybe a colaberation?

Happy Birthday!

Ok, I know I said nothing's wrong, but you keep saying paw. Its claw. For example:

They shook paws.

WRONG

they shook claws.

RIGHT!

Otherwise your story is the beast.

What are you talking about messed up. I wouldn't think the story was complete if the kids were grown.

Man, you practically had me CRYING...

Beautifully well-written story. The emotion, the feelings, the fact you kept EVERYONE in-character...

I'm going to say this right here, this has to be THE BEST Rio fan fic that has been written to this point!

Wonderful story, Count!