oh that was good! :D really like the bad Klaus! For a second I was afraid it was going to be a love triangle but like this it's great :))

This is really good!

continue please i really want to see what happens! and i loved it soooo update if you continue on with the story :]

I love it! Update soon!

It's an amazing start, but I believe you should continue it, make it a story. Maybe set in Elena's time or something. Think about it? :))

update!

Very nice. I just love the way you write Elijah, you capture his nature so perfectly, that beautiful calmness about him. Also a great job with Klaus. The intense, somewhat creepy mysterious vibe he carries is perfectly detailed. I liked the way things progressed throughout and the relationship Maria and Elijah formed in that short time. In fact, if you ever get the time and inspiration, this could turn into a nice full lenght story. And no major mistakes that I seen either.

i love anything Elijah-based, and this was really good :)

I love it, please a sequel.