great read chief, loved it.

This was pretty enjoyable. Good job!

Not bad.

I acctually find this pairing kinda cute and It's odd that we don't see more of it around here.

A rather interesting story with a pairing that is not seen too often around here. I enjoyed it.

Some small errors, you used "to" when "too" was needed, you had a bit of dialogue that read "sssjdbbdbn," said Xdhf "Sfhshhd!" instead of "Same dialogue," said Same Person, "Same Again!" Essentially you missed a comma. Forgot to capatilize some words, some missing periods.

Otherwise a well written story!

8/10

So cute! Loved this! You don't see many Kagura/Osaka stories. Keep up the great work!