Hahaha! Poor Shinra and Kadota. The Beast and His Pray. Better let them sleep. ;)

Omgosh this has got to be the greatest in character one shot that I have ever read! You are so talented! I can definitely see this happening. From shizuo's grumbling about house parties to his confusion of mistaking Izaya as a girl but then continuing to kiss him anyway when he realizes he's kissing a guy lol to when he discovers he's kissing IZAYA! Lmao and then his mishaps in the kitchen and Izaya totally taking advantage of the situation and seducing Shizuo. And aw it was so cute how Izaya was totally freaked out when Shizuo initiated a make out and tried to stop him because he feared Shizuo was plastered, which he was. And then he got real sad that he ended up right. Aw my lil heart! But I. The end hey wound up together anyway. lol I liked how it was hott and steamy even without the sex scene. Great job!

man that was hot af

This is just so good and amazing and, ugh, yes!

Because we can't just say frickin 'exhibitionism', no, that would be too simple _ we have to come up with some random-ass words that are so obscure Apple's dictionary can't even identify them.

Other than that I really enjoyed reading this X)

NICE

NICE NICE NICE

Very NICE

I love the mental image I got at the very ending of them not wanting to separate... so cute...

THAT WAS SOOOO GOOD! I was fangirling the entire time and the writing was awesome! I just wish it actually had the sex scene tho~ I wish that we could see what they did after they woke up too... sorry it was so good I wanted more lol. just wanted to tell u this is awesome and I love ur writing! an the way u write shizuo and izaya is perfect.

Oh boy, that was awesome! Haha, thanks for this!

Best drunken Shizuo story ever! *0* And awwww god, the end when they were sleeping was so fucking adorably cute! *O* *-*

Can I just that duckling analogy was the best thing ever! Such a cute oneshot!

Aw, even when they sleep, they're protective. Like a momma bear with her cubs. Wait, does that make Shizu-Chan the momma? Wait, no, this is yaoi! And that means...*trails off on her fujoshi philosopher rambles*

I know you will someday write a book because i read alot of shizaya and/or izuo fanfictions but ALL of yours are the best ones ive read. luv all ur stories CircusRunaway! KEEP WRITING!

I honestly didn't like it when Shizuo decided to blame Izaya for 'seducing and deceiving' him when in fact, Izaya did try to stop his sexual advances.

"Shizuo - so mean. You're being a jerk."

And I felt for Izaya when he seemed sad and hurt because of Shizuo's disgust and insulting words. I was like -

"It's okay Izaya. Don't mind that stupid protozoan, the jerk."

Then Izaya started helping Shizuo - getting him water and helping him up when he almost fell on his face and I was like -

"Ow, Izaya. You poor thing. Shizuo, you bastard! Stop falling and tripping and leaning on Izaya and then suspecting and questioning him when he tries to help you!"

But then, Shizuo made up his mind that he did like Izaya and that he wants him, after all - Izaya. Stop waiting.

I squealed and did my fangirl thing.

The smut started and it was hot and sexy. (LOL at Izaya telling those innocent couple in that room to scram while hanging upside down Shizuo's shoulder!)

And then, and then, morning comes and the fluff was sooooooo . . . I wish I was there so I could take a picture. It was so shhwwweeeeettttt.

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So, yeah. I was able to connect with the characters and sympathized with them and became pissed at them. That should tell you how great a story you've written. So, please continue writing more beautiful stories. You are a great author. Thanks and cheers.

Thisissofunny.

Omg so much sexyness! I loved this! Please write more stories like this! It was amazing!