Reviews for Ephemeral Permanence
Bearfield003 chapter 3 . 11/7/2016
I love that Chris showed his firing skills! And more. Haha, poor Wesker, having to run out before he can't keep himself in place. Chris shirtless is priceless! Love it!
NIKO's little Weaselette chapter 11 . 7/8/2014
It's so rare to find a story written using "I" but still from a character's perspective around here. I'm glad you did this. It seems authentic enough so great job. Always was a bit curious what Wesker was doing with his afterlife. xD
Thanks for the read!
JackDarkStone chapter 11 . 7/8/2013
I had started reading this not expecting anything good. I honestly thought it would be another one of those horribly written stories with no plot that I would later on regret reading.

As I started reading I started to change my mind. Seeing the way the story was told intrigued me and I couldn't stop reading. After a while I saw the clever ways you connected each chapter to the other. By then I was already absorbed in the story hanging on every word.

And after finishing the stories, I've concluded this story to be without a doubt one of the best written fan fictions on this site. You portrayed Wesker (almost) perfectly. I say almost because I can't shake the feeling that Wesker is asexual, not being interested in sex at all, but you're allowed a little freedom with your work.

Excella was a great addition to the story and I feel you portrayed her character very well. Having her there allowed you to have Wesker tell his story as if we were right there with him, while also allowing the reader to see how he behaved as he narrated without breaking the fourth wall. On a side note, I like how Excella was aware that she wasn't completely innocent and the apple analogy (?) was a great way to do this.

I think the greatest thing about this story, is that you made me sympathize with Wesker. I felt so sorry for him I had to remind myself that he wasn't real. You really made me change my perspective of him.

In conclusion, this was a great story and I get scared thinking I almost didn't read it.
uska chapter 11 . 10/7/2012
Its really awesome. You make great job. I take it like a real unspoken storyline of RE. Thanx for that. I tried to think about Wesker reasons by myself, but your version is just great.
Madame Wesker chapter 11 . 7/22/2012
Definitely out of character..however, well written and absolutely fascinating. Really enjoy the reasoning behind his "evil". Hurt and lost, a good man falls. Well done dear.
animevideogamelover777 chapter 11 . 5/5/2012
This story was truly amazing and the ending was just perfect. This may be the best story I have read on here, and thank you for this wonderful story.
Zet Sway chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
Okay so you know how I feel about Chris/Wesker, but this was actually worth reading. It's something I feel most people don't bother with, how Wesker became what he is. I think everyone just assumes he was always an evil genius with superhuman powers or something...

I appreciate his relationship with Dr. Birkin. Truth be told, I've always been interested in Birkin but I've never taken the time to actually go and read up on him. I feel bad for him, really.

As usual, I appreciate the first person perspective. I think everyone knows how I feel about first person at this point.

And at the end of the day, I feel like this is the only legitimate way to get Chris and Wesker in bed together. I love when authors push the boundaries of "two characters were obscenely bold with one another at the same exact time and had no qualms with sleeping with one another." Although lord knows I've done that enough times.

Thanks for the good read! I'm excited to see what you write next.
LawlessRuthlessHeartless chapter 11 . 5/9/2011
Hey there! ouo

I honestly don't like the pairing, although the whole thing was very well-written! I loved the way you wrote out the transformation of this average guy, workin' for a pharmaceutical company, turning into THE Albert Wesker. It was pretty awesome, I'm tellin' ya right now. Great job!
Queen of the Wild Frontier chapter 11 . 5/2/2011
Absolutely adored how you portrayed Wesker, am now more in love with him than ever 3

And as for Excella, killing her in Res 5 was a pleasure... but now I do feel for her too xD

All in all, great fic! Beautifully written ]

Lyz xx
kairi-Sparda chapter 11 . 4/29/2011
I can't describe how amazing your fic is, the plot and ideas were really well planed i even fell sorry for wesker, you made a really great work writting from his pov and still being in character, the end let me wishing for a prologue, it semmed like wesker got forgivnnes, i really love your writting, i hope to see more from you and i will also read your other fics
Skiptrix chapter 2 . 4/29/2011
I'm cheering fiercely for 1st-person Wesker - it's a rare and pleasantly surprising point of view (love it)

There are so many great quirks/twists - Chris' reason for getting the job is a great one. Wesker is refreshingly emotional/human (he actually made STARS for a good reason? And he 'likes' them? yay :D)

Kinda has a inception/eternal sunshine tone to it. You've definately got spot on, on the context of the job ('Wesker' and 'police captain' don't seem to join together though, still XD)

I really like the end of chapter 5 - it is true, most likely. And 6 : dun-dun-dun! awesome. Actually, I like all the chapters end and flow into the next.

I love a enthusiastic mad scientist - Will's characterization is great. And it's nice to see genuine friendship moments

A drunk Redfield is a very amusing (and surprising) Redfield.

It's good to see a story which has probed the probability of Wesker's 'whereabouts'. Quite fitting the pair are stuck together. Did the virus go to it's own little place in the clouds?

Should have been called the 'ego virus'.

And you gave Excella a great character - she is one in her own right.

The last chapter was melodramatic, but sealed off nicely. Well done :)