oooh this fanfic gives me chills!
i need more!
i need soooo much more of this!

Please update soon

I know you're the type of fellow to just jump around and work on fics as you please and I can respect that. Just want you to know I love this a lot and would really appreciate an update :3

If madara/obito is here, then that means blackbeard might still be alive. Damn

Hope it's not rape or anything with kushina..m out of ths story..killing is fine and revenge but rape and n allshit destroys everything in story

Be good to see this updated.

Update soon

And apparently shanks is his uncle now im questioning how did he even got lock up whitebeard and shanks would tear the world apart for their family the fuck

2 questions first why didnt whitebeard broke naruto out off impel down second why is he a d. whitebeard is nt a d.

Holy shit this is shit, you can’t write for shit and you’ve taken a big shit on the naruto universe. The way you’ve written naruto is just as an insanely arrogant guy with none of the qualities that he used to have, like charisma fo example and the way you’ve explained traits he does have is so jaded and unrealistic, that it’s kinda clear you’ve never experienced them in real life. You had a good thing going at first, the grammar was good you descriptions were okay, but then I saw the characters and was like, wow.

I like this story. Hoping for another update soon.

I've nearly forgiven you for your Prince of Darkness fanfic, these one piece fics of yours are bandaging up the cuts that little shit fic gave me quite nicely.

This story is awesome

So it's like dragon's fruit

Great job please continue