oh god, the bandaid bit got me! 2D is too f#cking cute!

This is just beautiful, I love it :)

No, you didn't suck... It was awesome! I just love the romance and oh my gosh! The whale is so...how do I put it? Grandma-of-fabulousness-ness-ish...? I still loved it hope I didn't sound really weird lmao

THis Story GIVes ,me lots of feels

More plz!

these last couple posts are awesome! u should make more, ur really gud at it

I like the whale. I like the whale allot.

Oh, please continue this, I love this soo fucking hard, including the talking whale Paula.

Pula is bubby

2D is flapjack

Murdoc is captain knuckles!

This my friend, was a good story! Now excuse me as try and wipe this smile off my face.

LOL sir captain niccals!

hahahahahaha! this story made me

laugh SO hard!

id like to see some more stories from you:)

That was such a cute story! I love the whale's personality and how 2D draws Murdoc getting eaten by whales. Oh, 2D.

D'awwwwwww, this is so hilarious and adorable at the same time! Oh my God, I laughed so much. That whale was friggin' tricky. And that part in 2-D's room is just beyond awesome! LOLOLOLOL. I loved this, okay? Okay.

Oh, I love your username, btw. My friend used to say Mango Starr everyday. She liked making fun of Ringo's name too. Good thing you're a Beatlerillaz fan. I'm adding you to my subscription list! :D

I thought this One-Shot was interesting. I'd never read a Murdoc/2D romance before, so I didn't know what to expect. I really loved the whale XD

My only critique is that you didn't capitalize I's, and you used 'Your' in place of "You're" Otherwise good job! :)