Omg! Ahhh! It's amazing! It's a really great story! I loved it! Now I'm gonna read the next one!:D

there are some things I don't like about this story but you got me hooked so good job

i am just completely awestruck at this piece of artwork posted here. i freakin LOVE THIS! it is REALLY hard to find a story wth this much drama, action, suspense, and romance in it! and best of all, even through all obstacles, Jenny and Jak STILL manage to stay together and keep their love strong to the very end. also, love the karaoke scene in the last chap! excellent song choice! i listened to it while reading and it matches Jak and Jenny's relationship as well as the mood of the actual video game! you are just freakin AMAZING! I TOTALLY LOVE THIS WORK! GOD I MEAN THIS IS SO AWESOME THAT I LOVE YOU (NOT IN THAT WAY!)

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Adorable story! Loved it! :D

I would've been really upset with you if you killed her!

A beauty of an ending! Sad its over but a very good story it was!

aw no! not Sig! The only black man in the game!

I'm so happy that you updated! Thank you.

Anyway, I am loving this story and can not wait to see how you finish it up. Keep up the good work.

Much love

Butterfly-Hime

The drying the tears and rubbing her nose was so cute I squeaked with glee! wait a minute! is that a cliffhanger? *jumps off the edge to read more*

oh i love this story so much i was kinda O.O when jak and jenny did it at the beginning, but other than that i absolutely love it 3

omg total loved it!

keepp up the good work!

I am so in love with this story! The song titles do indeed fit into each and every chapter. I am so eager as to what is going to happen next with Jenny and Jak. This is a very well written story and it does stay true to the Jak II story line. Keep it up and this will be an even more amazing story! If you ever need help with anything, don't be hesitate to ask because I love the Jak and Daxter series! D

Sincerely,

ZombieZapper101

omg! nooooo poor jeennnyyy! TT Jak you better hurry up man!

i soooo have to see what happens next!

I loved this chapter! Well and hated it but that just means your doing a great job! Love your story, can't wait for the next chapter!