| Reviews for Never Doubt This |
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   WatchtoonzRex chapter 18 . 4/25 well, so Caspian indirectly confess huh.. that's nice...also the last part is intense... |
| WatchtoonzRex chapter 17 . 7/7/2019 Jesus it's long, you need to learn how to cut it down...it's like 5 stories in 1 chapter...take me 5 days to finish this chapter...it's still good tho... |
| WatchtoonzRex chapter 16 . 5/7/2019 I thought it will be bloody and deadly..but thank God it's not..I'm still confused with the sacrifice I you return part...so someone will die if she cameback to England? |
| WatchtoonzRex chapter 15 . 4/26/2019 this chapter is very very long...you can. just break the stories into 3-5 chapters.. because the story of this chapter is not even that all inter-connected...it takes me half a day to finish...it's like watching 4 episodes of walking dead combined and turn into 1 episode. my head hurts. .it will give your followers some readers fatigue...also can you reduce or dont do it at all the author note at the middle of the story ..it's really ruining the flow of the story and it felt really annoying...much better if you put all your author note at the end of the chapter..also..that Thomas kiss is bothering me, reminds me of twilight, where the heroine is kissing other male characters aside from the leading male character, ugh...much better if they just kiss at the middle of the ball in front of James, Thomas and Liliandril, it's like Rubbing on their faces...the chapter is good finally they did the kiss...it's amazing chapter tho..good job... |
| WatchtoonzRex chapter 14 . 4/25/2019 why it's turning into love triangle...this is a long chapter...and still good tho... |
| WatchtoonzRex chapter 13 . 4/24/2019 so it's their official kiss for our main characters in this story..nice to see some progress... |
| WatchtoonzRex chapter 12 . 4/21/2019 this is the longest...I'm glad I'm seeing progression...where almost halfway of the entire story and I feel the pacing is slow..the mystery are becoming overstretched.. still good chapter... |
| WatchtoonzRex chapter 11 . 4/21/2019 who the f*ck is that guy? |
| WatchtoonzRex chapter 10 . 4/21/2019 it's always good... |
| WatchtoonzRex chapter 9 . 4/20/2019 dannsair is always amusing as ever...the new characters and the captain is interesting and amusing too... |
| WatchtoonzRex chapter 8 . 4/19/2019 the horse are always funny...it's very long chapter...but the geography of Narnia In this fanfic is confusing...I thought Calormen are at the South of Narnia and more of desert than wood lands...also they have their own king, and they hate the north mostly Archenland and Narnia (cair paravel)...so Caspian can't be their king...at first I thought Calormen kidnap Caspian tho...anyway it's still nice tho... |
| WatchtoonzRex chapter 7 . 4/19/2019 that horse tho..very amusing but with attitude...also it's funny to see Lucy getting jealous because of some clothes.. LOL |
| WatchtoonzRex chapter 6 . 4/18/2019 that escalated quickly..it's intense . i love wondering...why only Lucy they after...what happen to the three siblings, Thomas and Eustace?.. |
| WatchtoonzRex chapter 5 . 4/18/2019 like the Peter scenes...still waiting when Lucy will go to Narnia? |
| WatchtoonzRex chapter 4 . 4/18/2019 damn ..too much drama...Susan is really mean...and nice to see Lucy is fighting back... |
