I finished your story and it was soooooo heartclenching, heartwarming and beautiful !
I wished I could see Paul more fathering the little Emily but it was pretty good like it ! His interactions with her was so adorable ! And Dawn who help Paul little by little and reach him with feelings ? So good nngh !
And the epilogue chapter ? So touching ahhh !
Thank you so much for you marvelous story ! 3

Omg this story was so sweet! I love there family! Please write more Ikarishipping fanfic! No pressure!

I loved this!

Nice story! I enjoyed it! Thanks for writing it! :)

This story is so adorable! Dawn/Paul is one of my favorite pairings, and I think you did a really good job keeping them in character about how'd they'd react to certain situations. I just had to comment on this chapter because I laughed so hard when Dawn said, "You'll always have Pikachu!" :)

this is so goooooood!

DEATHTRAP ADAM DEATHTRAP

AWEEEEEE

I loved this story, since it was very different. It had a good flow to it and was fairly original all in all. You are a great writer and I love your work. Keep up the Ikari!

Reading this was weird to me cuz I'm used 2 Teen. But it was worth it. Good job.

And that, my interns, is the picture of prefect fanfictions.

*Interns: Oooooo, Aaaahhh -clapping-*

I expect to see more beautiful work from you, Rosie,

or I may have to kill someone.

*Dun dun dunnnnn*

:D

Having the time of her life,

Lynx

aww! this is a good ending and well done for making a good story! w

Thank you so very much for writing such a beautiful story! I wish it didn't end...but end was fitting and good! I really enjoyed this story a lot! Thanks once again! :DDDDD

*Sniff* Time skips make children grow up so fast...and make new ones appear at the same time xD What does Pepper look like? Mom or Dad?

I enjoyed reading this and look forward to any other new stories you can come out with :3

Great ending. I'm glad it was happy. This story was awesome! Please do write another.