Or she could leave kill everyone and get deeks out safely shes always trying to prove shes better then deeks at everything now she should prove it instend of sacrificing him and herself after he gave her a way out.

What a selfish bitch

Hut with a pipe to the head more then once and not even a concussion? Wow bet kensi will get hit once and end up brain damaged cause thats how all fanfics go his always totally fine after beating and shes like fucking dead after 1 hit because its always ending up about HER

Great story! Thoroughly enjoyed reading every part of it!

Sorry for your loss. This is a brialliant story and you are such a good writer. I too llat my older brother this March. Thank you for the amazing story, even if you don't continue.

I was pleased with the ending actually thought you did a great job all round:)

I'm sorry for your loss. I lost someone I loved a lot too.

AWWWWWWWWWWWW.
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THE STORY !
It was just sooo amazing :) Thank you for finishing it :)

Great story! Sequel?

Good story, but there were a lot of grammatical errors. You should really get a beta to help you edit your stories. Also, feeding tubes don't go in the arm, feeding tubes are generally inserted one of two ways, surgically through the abdominial wall directly into the stomach or into the nose, through the esophagus and into the stomach (my youngest cousin was born 3 months premature and had this type of feeding tube for the first 4-5 months of his life). Keep writing.

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It looks like a rough recovery for Densi but it was great to see the concern they both had for one another.

Teasing on Sam to cheer Deeks up was great!

If it's really the end, don't forget to change the story status to 'complete'.

Nicely done overall!

great ending! :D

Good work, Glad this story found a happy end and glad you wrote it.

Thank you.

This story is amazing, the raw emotions and the feelings of utter helplessness add such gravity to the storytelling that I am awe struck. I'm deeply saddened by your loss, I have no words of comfort to give but hope that you can find the strength to endure. Endure and rise above your hardships that is the best way to honor those that have left us.

I really like this story, very intense at times, but came out as a happy ending..Great job, it was a pleasure to experience your talent for telling a great story..Thank you...

This was very very good. Sad it's the last chapter though. Great story, thanks for writing it.