BEST TAKARI STORY EVAR!

I am mad what bout Davis and Kari they are suppose to be together

i really liked your story- just cute/funny/cheesy to work for a sunday afternoon. and i like how the Characters had enough integrity to not slip into an 'r' rated movie, like so many others would have- it made me smile... thanks.

it's great! i don't know how you do it, but i love it big time

i enjoyed reading that and i luv the ending.

especially since it's takari and not dakari.

i really enjoyed the davis bashing and jealousy.

yeah, i really don't like davis very much..

sweet

I *wish* you'd write more takari... hopeless wish though, eh?

good story dude! But i think daisuke is a little out of character. And i don't think takeru would say that hicare could'nt stand him but i gess you had to do that for the story. That was a very good fic.)

i've just got to have a guess... was 'Attack of the killer' sludge from 'attack of the killer tomato'? anyway, nice fic!

Wow. Nice. Firenzie, you have the talent of the Takari. Although you overdid Kari in the movie, but i guess you needed an excuse to make her leave so Davis could enter. Here's the critic, signing off.

This is a Takeru/Hikari fic. That's it. There's some 'I am Davis, the evil, and I WILL HAVE KARI', but it's not TOO excessively done. There's some mild, fluffy conflict. Again, it's just a Takeru/Hikari fic. The movie scene was cute, but like the rest of the fic, it really didn't hold any weight. AGAIN, this fic is for those of us who are blessed enough (joke, don't take it offensively) to enjoy some light, Takeru/Hikari fluff. 3*/5* Notes to the author: You got Attack of the Killer Sludge from 'ATTACK OF THE KILLER TOMATOES!' Great movie, no? I'd add more weight to it the next time you write a romance. Expand on the scenes. Especially the movie scene. That was good. Lighten up on the Davis bashing. It gets really old and really lame pretty darn quick. And change the title, will ya? 'Destined' is so plain. Make it a few words and have it relate more to the story then just the Tai/Sora bit. It would help. Your summary was good, though, I'll give you that. Keep on writing. Oh, and by the way... KOUMI IS THE ULTIMATE AND TOTAL SUPREME RULER OF ALL DIGIFIC COUPLES! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! There. Any questions, comments, or complaints, email to:

that was great. write more takari's.

yeah!i like it!they r so destined...

mystic_blue17

awwww, I loved that! *g* and the Matt factor was cool too. GO TAKARI! (And taiora!)

That was an awesome Takari!