Are we skipping over how Harris got away from "Doktor"? Did I miss it?

Please continue and finish this story, it has to be finished ,

please update, it's great

I love that his first reaction to Cybertronian shouting is to hiss in Parseltongue

With the sadistic authoress however one could be sure that they'd run into something bigger than a human.

Dear Authoress, You should seriously consider continuing this.I absolutely loved it.

I definitely like the plot. Constructively, there are a few spots that need to be cleaned up a bit as the plot seems scattered before getting back on track (not counting the purposeful scatterbrained thoughts of "Harris") but e writing style, though unpolished, is very riveting and creative while encouraging an air of suspense and humor. I am a big fan of this story so far and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter of the story. I am getting the impression that Harris will revert to a sparkling instead of dying and I can't wait to see if that is the case or not. Please continue to write and explore as you are clearly a true, though unpolished, talent in writing.

Harry can't die! The Minis need him!
I adore your characterizations and story-telling, and the way you've woven in bits of Harry's Before into the recent chapters has been almost heartbreaking. It's coming across to me as some sort of a super long goodbye message, and I don't want that to be true, so please let him live. In some fashion!
I'm looking forward to an update, hopefully soon!

(btw, typically using https instead of http gets you around alot of the security that schools employ and whatnot...)

Discontinued? that sucks...

I love your story and I can not wait to read more! Thank you for all of your hard work!

why did you stop

This is good. Too bad it's discontinued

this is amazing and I hope u continue writing this work of art

*sigh* Discontinued... what a shame.
Well, I hope you found co-operative muses elsewhere. :)