Great story. Where are the duels?

Yep, I stand by what I said but you made it work. You didn't bog it down with tonnes of pointless conflict with all the potential rivals. Most of em were quickly dealt with which I am thankful for. Could have turned into one big mess.

Still one of the best fics I have ever read. Thank you very much for this master piece!

I truly love this fanfic. Whenever I rewatch GX I always end up coming back to this story because to me it could almost be the canon ending to the story. That’s how good I think this is written.

So funny thing is this was the very first fanfiction I had ever read. Loved it then and I absolutely have loved it so far right now. Been really good reading it again for the first time in a few years.

There is one little uneccesary thing in this fic though for me and it is the amount of suitors Alexis seems to have. I get it, she is from a wealthy family, looks good and has a fun personality but we have like 5 potential love rivals at this point already.

There is Jaden himself, Chazz, Harrington who doesn't know the meaning of the word no, Zane who just makes this entire thing incredibly awkward, I am willing to bet David is going to be another lad in love with Alexis and we still have the unknown arranged marriage dude as well. 6 people in total and 5 rivals.

I am all for a bit of conflict to grow a relationship but 5 others is a bit much is it not? 2 are his friends making it incredibly awkward and David is going to be their brother in law to make it even more awkward if he is into her.

Yes I am aware this fic has long since been completed but just thought I would share my thoughts. Other than the absurd amount of suitors that boggles my mind I have absolutely loved everything else!

is there gonna be a sequel

I know this story is ancient, (why did I call 6 years ago ancient?), but I like to think that the Man will punch Harrington's teeth in, then buy out his company, arrest him, and then kick him right between the legs.

Wow I love the story, but i kinda wish you wrote Jaden Yuki and David Rabb dueling each other with Jadens Elemental Hero Neos or Elemental Hero Terra Firma against David's Big Saturn but I respect your decision for who's dueling who.
Also I kinda wish you mentioned Koyo and Midori Hibiki in this since you brought two characters from the manga. Except for Koyo giving Winged Kuriboh to Jaden Since this stories based from the anime when Yugi gave Jaden Winged Kuriboh, but Elemental Hero Terra Firma would be good for Koyo giving to Jaden, but like I said I respect your decision of the story and I'm thankful to you for pairing Jaden and Alexis as husband and wife so Thank You.

Hey just wanted to say white vow is an amazing fanfic it was so good I read it twice XD as with all good things i hated to see it end yet such an awesome ending.

This is one of the most cutest stories here! It is fascinating ! I'm definitely looking forward to a new story similar to this.
Thanks a bunch !

Great story! Really enjoyed the relationship between the two. Felt like watching the show again

Really awesome story I truly love it! Jade is so cuteeee! Thanks for sharing your amazing work with us it's so cool! !

Dude, you should another sequal for continuation of Judai and Asuka's child cause I think you've have my gratitude to come so far to be make it and now this fanfiction is one of my favorite anime and best shipping. So take time for the upcoming news of sequal because you have started your legacy right here on this fanfiction.

I'm only on chaper 1 but i already know that was seto kaiba that bet on jaden to marry alexis if jaden lost

is that masked bike rider stealing card spirits a reference to the movie where Jaden and Yusei go back in time and team up with Yugi to take his ass down?

This story has been great. I can really feel the characters personalities. I love the development of Jaden and alexis and also the fact that Chazz and zane's attraction to Alexis. Dammit David, why you ruin everything? Looking forward to the rest of this story. 5/5