Reviews for Last Wish and Testament
AlmightyFatty chapter 4 . 6/18
Everyone seems pretty calm about something as large as Shurikan appearing. Seeing as how Sapphira is the size of Shurkians head more or less. I guess if they describe Gladr as a big hill, Shurkian would be a mountain lol. Also Urgals don't have hooves but seven toes.
Nevertheless thank you for the story friend.
stylo1 chapter 5 . 2/15
you are an idiot. accidental intent magic turns yourself into a dragon. no not any dragon a death dragon with all its memories aswell as all of voldemorts. ofc thats not where it end cause now he needs to fight a war or his body will kill him.
KathyBk chapter 7 . 1/26
Love this. Absolutely love this amazing piece of work. Roran being Harry’s ( or Shurikan’s) rider is cool. Though I didn’t quite get whether Harry soul is inside of Shurikan’s body or did Harry’s body and soul both merge with Shurikan’s making him like an animagus, with a human part in him in the body? If only Harry’s soul is inside of Shurikan’s body, with Harry physically being a dragon will he mate with Saphira? As much as the thought bothers me a bit, Harry is a dragon with mating instinct even though his thought process is most of the time human. So would he try to continue the line of the dragons? And destroying the dragon stones (edunari) really seems a bit much, I thought they only had a bit of consciousness in them rather than their soul, like wizarding paintings, but anyways it’s really amazing and I for one am looking forward for more! Yay for Shurikan’s and Saphira... and Roran as a rider!
Runereader of the Nightwings chapter 7 . 9/24/2019
wAiT wHaT. Plot Twist. Anddddddddd 6 years later no update. I cri every time.
Guest chapter 7 . 6/14/2019
Hey!
Have you thought on continuing this?. I honestly don't know how you don't have more reviews
shirzadym chapter 7 . 2/27/2019
A very interesting story.
Even though it's been 6 years,PLEASE continue this.
Treant Balewood chapter 7 . 10/5/2018
I had to come back and reread this story, still loving it. Thanks For Writing!
Izaleana chapter 7 . 6/23/2018
This is great. I love the way you’ve written it, and the way it works. The explanation at the end took me by surprise but fits well. An amazing read.
Wolfman2152 chapter 7 . 5/17/2018
Sweet Mary, Mother of God! That is one doozy of a cliffhanger. Great story!
Rangle chapter 7 . 2/12/2018
Did you write yourself into a corner or did you just lose interest in the story? Hmm.
Kikuriki chapter 2 . 1/31/2018
You described Roran as corpulent in this chapter, specifically "The corpulent man paced as he spoke." I'm pointing this out because corpulent means fat, which Roran definitely isn't.
MathiasNightlord01 chapter 5 . 1/6/2018
Main problem I see is that you've made Harry/Shurikan a way smaller than he actually is. Shurikan is so big in the books that he's several times larger than Glaedr

He's so big he's described as having spikes as thick as tree trunks and made the ground shake for more than a mile around him with every step he took. I don't think you realize how Titanic in size he is...

I'd say he rivals the likes of dragons like Balerion the Black Dread from ASOIAF and Smaug from the Hobbit.
EIpy chapter 7 . 12/9/2017
...And just after you dropped that bombshell, the chapter ends and the story isn't updated in 5 years.. good work though. The only thing that seems illogical to me is that Harry wants Roran to become his rider, I would just want to be free instead of being chained to someone for eternity.
crimson hearts chapter 7 . 11/29/2017
wow. so sad to see i ran out of chapters. loved it all so far. just when i was like whats up with harry just being a dragon bam you change him back atleast partially. cant wait to read more.
The Age of Awesomeness chapter 7 . 8/21/2017
Well, that's a cliffhanger! This is amazing, so I hope you update soon!
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