A beautiful story. xoxo

Please update soon! Please Please Please!

The events are good but the execution isn't so great. You need to stoop switching between tenses

It's so good! I need more

I DONT LIKE BURNS. HE IS EVIL! TEAM O'WANDA!

Really cute! As for baby names you couldn't name Mel's kid James cause it can be shortened to Jamie. I think someting more hard core like Cade or Xander. I feel like Wanda is a bit OOC, same with Ian. I think they should have a baby girl.

I am really enjoying this story, and can't wait for the next chapter to be posted. Loving the relationships between Jared and Melanie and Ian and Wanda, they're just so cute :) I really really wana know what the deal is with Wanda and Burns, but I really hope that nothing comes in the way of her and Ian. As for baby names, they should have really special and unique names, to emphasise how special they really are. Please keep writing and I'll try to review each time. :) Much love xx

This is very good! It's interesting to! Keep writing this I wanna know what happens next!

When are you going to post the next chapter?

Wow this is awesome! Please update soon!

I like the story;) my only critique is that i really don't like the whole "Wanda and burns" thing. In the host, Wanda said Ian was her only partner so I think it's best to keep burns out of it. I hope you take my suggestion to heart. Thanks! Great story!

I still liked this chapter! And thank you soooooooooo much for mentioning me at the start of it! It made me so happy, no one has done that before! I think that if they are boys, Wanda might name hers Walter in memory and Melanie might name hers Jackson? I don't know, that is just a random name that came to mind! If they are girls, Wanda would probably call hers something sweet and angelic and Melanie's something a bit more fiestier? I don't know! Anyways, thank you again!

so, what? shes pregnant with Ian's baby but shes now in love with Burns? when are you going to post the next chapter?

Hi! I read it, and really liked it! I hope Wanda doesn't break up with Ian to go with Burns though, O'Wanda was my favourite couple! I con't wait for the movie either... Keep writing:)

I just found your story, really good, well written, had me laughing, I see you haven't updated in a while, please continue if you will, really want to know more.