Great job please continue it soon

I really like the idea of this fic but the problem i have with it is how drawn out and suffocating several parts are.

Kabuto vs Gian Ramen Bowl?
Ramen Rangers unite!

the tenth chapter drowned the story in shit.. unreadable

The story is really good and I kind of like sakura and sasuke’s personality, it makes them more fun to read.
I wish that the story would be updated, man, I always feel so sad when I read the last chapter of a good fanfic that wasn’t updated in years but I know that there’s still a small chance to be updated.
Wish you guys luck

Love this story plz keep writing

Ch 13 Naruto still had better life than the Leaf Shitbag with Orochimaru and much stronger. Anyway will Zabuza will Return attach his hand in future if when he becomes a ally and survives. He couldn't defeat Naruto . Those strings he doesn't have vitals anymore beside cursed state . Huga will be helpless because their jentle fist would be absorbed. Only weapons could probably hurt Naruto maybe.

Please update. I hope Sakura will learn Puppetry beside her med. training Tsunade crazy shattering punch and ILLUSION learning as useful and best the rest is with shadow clones to expand her reserves .

Ch 12 JASHINIST HIDAN POWER . REVEALED SHARINGAN KNOWN .

Ch 11 Well in the bright side Naruto will know how much power he got Cough Samehada skin/scales Explosive clay Puppetry in the beginning unless unleash Shira Tensei or mangecou things or Jashin curse state and deal with the enemy .

Ch 8 Zetsu is the final Key .

Ch 2 Was that Kushina and will in future escape this time?

heh, for a few minutes i got worried that we wouldnt have any deidara DNA xD

this started good but became disappointing once you killed kushina. If he can talk to the kyubi why wouldn't the kyubi inform him he may be able to revive his mother? so, yea, disappointing end.

start was good then went shit don't read

Honestly, I'm a bit disappointed in how OOC Sakura and Sasuke turned out to be. You did so well with Orochimaru, Kabuto, and the Sandaime, I honestly couldn't wait to see how Sasuke and Sakura would turn out to be. But it seemed like you just threw their entire character out the window :( With Naruto, you had a completely understandable reason- when with Kabuto, being polite didn't do him any good anyways -but I was pretty disappointed at how little effort was put into them. The story, up until that point, was very well thought out and written. The story, overall, is very good, and I love your twists on this prompt! I can't wait to see more chapters!