Thanks for the epilogue
Thanks for your time
Regards
LQUEZ

I think both chapters are good.

Thanks for your time
Regards
LQUEZ

Je relis cette histoire pour la 2eme fois et je me régale autant que la première/ Bravo

Hey! honestly, you write well. You have a wide vocabulary. Although, why is rape a kink or something that must be shown to be a tease or almost demand. NOBODY WANTS TO BE RAPED, EVEN FICTIONAL CHARACTERS. Its very disturbing to me, to insinuate this in the story. Rape is not something you can play around with, espically considering the context. Even dom and sub relationships dont behave in these ways, regarless of vampires or not this is not cool. Non consentual sex is not sex. I think you should chnage this part and apologise for writing it in the first place. Thankyou.

Thanks for writing this story. Sadly, it endet just there, where it gets interesting.

please write MORE!

Interesting story

So good. A wonderful and unexpected HEA. Glad you altered certain Vampire characteristics. How about another story? Thanks, Mia

I loved this!
Maybe, someday you’ll have an itch,
and do a future take?
*hugles*

J'ai passé un bon moment de lecture mais j'avoue que la fin me laisse un goût d'inachevé. Merci pour votre imagination débordante.

Great story so far, I'm really enjoying it. xxx

Awesome

Awwwwwww

Wonderful

Awwwwwww