This was such a beautiful story c': I'm getting teary. Honestly, one of the best stories I've read on here. Amazing.

NICE CHAPTER THAT STEPHANIE IS A BITCH :p. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK.

AWWWWW THE END WAS SO SAD BUT I ENJOYED EVERY SINGLE WORD IN THIS STORY AND I THINK IT'S YOUR BEST SECOND TO BEST MY NUMBER ONE IS YOUR WORST NIGHTMARE THAT STORY IS BEAUTIFUL( STARTS TEARING UP) I KNOW IM RANDOM BUT THAT NATURAL FOR ME ANYWAY AWESOME STORY KEEP UP THE PERFECT WORK:) P.S I HEART GUITAR HERO

good story, but i wish you had a chapter for the third kid

Btw i totally get the ADJL and KP references. And both are great shows.

T.T that was touching yet it made me cry. Great story. :)

Well, I probably didn't review the previous chapters, but this story is really good, and believe me I'm crying while reading this chapter! I like the idea of dying in each others' arms...it's really romantic. Keep up the incredible work and write more!

Oh my gosh... three words: best end ever

It seems Bailey died for the pain of lose Cody right? I loved it, again, best end ever

Isabella... I love that name xD and James is cool too xD

Thanks for tha chapter, is cute as always

Yay she survived! And I love the names!

Poor Bailey... Oh and just so you know, women in labor aren't allowed to eat anything, as it could hurt the baby.

Bailey scared Cody xD come on! you two can hold this!

i love this story!

i think you should keep writing.

you are a good writer!

keep it up!

You can do it Bailey!

Here it comes!