why you no update this is a great story

Honestly, i never really like any fanfictions but this one really ticked me off. You advertise it as Perlia which means you start off well enough. But then, you fuck the entire plot by making Percy CRUSH on Thalia for no reason! Nothing in the books suggested they liked each other in that way so you needed to use your own plot device for it to work. Too forced. Too many OOC’s and all around terrible dialogue. Not good. I only treat fanfictions with such criticism as they advertise themselves as stories and therefore should be presented and thought out like one. Maybe I had too high expectations, i rarely ever see Perlia and they are one of my favourite pairings when done right. Try again. Don’t give up.

Liking the story so far, really like the simplicity of it, most writers try to over complicate things

I so totally hate you. *sticks up middle finger*

Idiot they obviously go to Greece also a bitch

great story are you going to add a new chapter soon?

How many frickin author's notes are you gonna have?!

if he had the Acilles spot y did the blade pierce him?

Wtf is wrong with u

I'm gonna dieeeeee
I need you too update
PLEASE

No not Will...

This character is a boy
His name is Eliot
He is 14
Nico is 15 btw
He has bot light Brown hair and warm chocolate Brown eyes

NNNNOOOOO
Nico and annabeth should not date!
Nico has a crush on Percy .

Nice but delete the AN chapters, you aren't supposed to be doing that in the first place and it irritates the readers

Amazing please go on!