I really enjoyed reading this story. I really like your writing style, hope to see more from you in the future.

This is a beautiful story

The sweet and cuties story ...i have ever read ..author- San to tell you the truth you have a very warm and soft heart …when I first read this story I don't through the story make me show so much feeling ...it is just like I can feel it ...no seriously ...you should have really proud of yourself ...If don't mind could you changed the rated M
To rated T because the story does not show any prev ...scene and it is more like a very inspirated story for young and teenager and of course for adult too then some people that I know also could enjoy it ...because of the rated they could not but ...if you consider my request I would be really grateful of you .if you don't wanna than I understand..

This story was actually wonderful to read. It was very different from the usual SasuSaku stories I read that are AU, the uniqueness of it was quite refreshing to read. The background you thought up seems a little scattered but it was still a good one, I loved how you made Sakura's character so strong, like she really is. The way you portrayed Sakura in general was beautiful I loved it completely, her character, her strength, her emotions...Just everything.
I was a little confused at times, particularly on Yoshirou's age, but perhaps I missed something as I was reading, but also Sasori being the assassin, the way you described him made it seem like he was a middle aged man... Your descriptions could be worked on a little as at times it was very hard to follow who was talking, or picture what was actually happening between everyone.
I do think you could have allowed for more development to happen between Sasuke and Sakura before the big reveal, it seemed a little rushed and furthermore, the way the both of them seemed to forget Sasuke pretty much torturing her seemed a little odd, I mean that was a very significant moment as Sakura literally had the love of her life, her hero almost beat her to death.
I thought Tsunade's role was wonderful, she was very in character yet had a stronger pinch of motherliness in her, I think she became a close second as my favourite character in the story.
Overall great story, however a little development between characters (and maybe some more elaborations on Sasuke's feelings) particularly between Sasuke and Sakura, a little more development between the girls and Sakura would have also been a nice touch.
Thanks for the great read, I hope you don't take any offence to what I have written, Constructive criticism right? *laughs nervously*

p.s. I don't know if this is because you're american (assuming that you are since you missed out 'u's in words at times) because I know they pronounce it as "Saki", but it's spelt as "Sake"

Damn! I'm being so emotional right now!
Seriously I don't have the words to describe how delighted I'm feeling right now!
*Feeling like want to jump up and down out of joy*
Really admire the author's Amazing work!

I literally had tears in my eyes, such a beautiful scene but then a laugh cracked out by the possessed bushes! lol
Love this fic!

Love it so so SOooooooo Much!
Damn I have squealed and shrieked so much times out of HappinEss!
Take tht u old geezers!
P.s. Had to put a pillow in my mouth from squealing so much!

OMG!
xD i hav no idea how i am feeling right now but EXciTeMeNT is one of TheM!

Damn! Im so Freakin' in love with this Fic!
Made me cry and laugh so much! Love it!

Ok tht really pained me! Poor Sakura

Keeps getting Awesome!

Loved it!

This was a very sweet story... It's funny how Sasuke was willing to be with a man though Lol when he didn't know Lol

Love it!

i really enjoyed this story :) it was beautiful ! but what happened to Natsume after? I love it. i'm happy for TenTen, she got to be part of the police force after all :)