man you havent updated this in forever, but i would really like it if you did write more. I kind of liked where this was going, and I am interested in how the two will be interacting while the auror is there.

what happen next? please update..love it so much..

Please update soon thanks

Anyone see a return address on that Howler from Amy Winchester? I'd like to hex her for that...

The auror has come to monitor their interactions for the day. This should be highly amusing. I can't wait to see what happens next.

I reviewed this chapter once before, as well as the last chapter of this story, but for some reason my review didn't show up. I'm going to assume it was due to a site glitch, as I've seen this site mess up many times before. So I'm going to retype my review so I've left a review for every chapter.

It looks like Severus is already stepping up and playing the role as husband, even though he acted like he didn't like the idea of being forced into marriage at first. In fact I'm beginning to sense that Severus might not mind marrying her so much after all. He shows kindness and concern, and I believe he'll help her fell better if given enough time. He's already helping by healing her burns. She's lucky to have him. I hope she realizes that soon.

I'm starting to get curious. Why does Mikayla hate Dumbledore so much anyway?

Dragon

Minerva says she prefers dogs over cats and has socks with dogs on them. How amusing. That gave me a bit of a chuckle when I read it. Now I have visions of her with socks that have poodles on them in my mind. lol

Good lord, I want to smack Rita upside the head for what she is so like her to do something like that. 'Accidently set fire to the Ministry of Magic while attempting to create fireworks to celebrate the late Albus Dumbledore's life.' Oh please. It's a shame Mikayla didn't manage to put Rita in St. Mungo's along with Umbridge.

Dragon

I can't believe McGonagall forgot to ward the windows. That was a big mistake, one I'm sure Severus wouldn't make.

This is very interesting. I'm curious to see what Mikayla might try getting into while she's at Hogwarts and how this will effect Severus' work. It could be difficult, especially when the auror arrives to take notes and monitor their activities and interactions.

Which reminds me, they're expected to consummate their marriage... That should be fun, though I dearly hope one of the aurors won't be there watching them. Not pleasant. I hope they can find a bit of privacy while preforming such an act.

Dragon

I bet the look on Sev's face when she asked him to marry Mikayla was priceless. How amusing.

The way I look at this, I see Severus as being more of a caring protector than a professor. I'm not sure why but it just seems that way. Probably because I can see him protecting hr and keeping her safe and out of trouble.
Severus makes a good protector, very loving and kind.

Dragon

She stole important documents, turned five ministry employees into toads, and put Umbridge in St. Mungo's. Nicely done. I only wish I had been there to join her when she put that foul Umbridge in St. Mungo's. I never liked Umbridge.

No wonder Mikayla's upset. Losing her family in the war would greatly upset anyone. And it makes me mad that the ministry doesn't seem to care or understand. They should be more caring and try to help her, not lock her away.

Dragon

Mikayla seems to have a very bold and strong attitude, walking into the ministry like that, undisguised, setting fire to the banner like that. I like that about her. So I say good for her. If she's upset and someone hurt her, then they should be sorry for what they did.

I wonder, though, why Mikayla is upset. I simply must read more to find out what happened. Like always, your talented writing skills have grabbed my attention right at the very beginning of the story. You've always been a brilliant writer, and I hope to hear more from you soon.

Dragon

Very interesting story! I can't wait to see what happens next and the reasoning behind her hatred of Dumbledore.

"I could run off with Sirius Black..." Thats funny, really it is. Made me smile. Anywho, thanks for thework and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

I loved it please undate this story sooner! :) Please!

They are perfectly matched huh. One hates Dumbledore, the other killed him. Shh, true love. Update soon. :)