Great story.

I cannot believe you had a twilight reference in this chapter. Right after a Harry Potter one. Like. Whoa nelly. Hahahahaha

Incredible story! I really enjoyed it! Very intense and emotional! I hope everything works out!

I think Kate was being way to dramatic

What an amazing series - can't wait to read the next part.

I have to agree with the way Kate would feel. She wants to be whole and be with him, not needy and be kept by him. Something like that even though it is hard for me to put the words together! On to 'Try Again'!

Thanks for this one!

Well, the part with Ashley talking to Kate was lifting, but Castle and Montgomery is another matter. Only one more chapter?

I love this! Alexis has her heart captured by the same woman that has captured her dad's heart and she wants her to be her step-mom! Too cool!

I loved the kiss to Castle's hand! Great touch! No more Josh! Excellent! The Paige thing though, there must be something there for you to make it so prominent. Onward!

I like how you have them as a team all the time, no matter where they are or what they are doing. They operate like a married couple, but a very special couple. More in sync with each other than even myself and my wife, and we work extremely well together! They make a great partnership!

That was tough on both of them! I wouldn't have guessed at how much Kate meant to her at this point. I am thinking Alexis is looking at her as her 'mom' figure and hoping maybe she might move into that role. And Kate admits that 'something' is going on. Nice!

Come on, Castle! Protect your girl!

Kate never did answer her question about dating her dad, did she? I was hoping to hear that! And she now has the go ahead for Alexis! And she can arrest Alexis if she wants to!

Wow! This is interesting! Castle is working hard to save his girl! Wouldn't have expected less of him. No thoughts of himself, only his Kate. Nice story so far!

Is this a real place? Have to run a search on that! Ending with a really big question! I like it!