This was so good!I loved all the humer in this story!

I'm with Yami on this one ;)

this crack fic was so funny and awesome! I love you both

I think I am finally dying of laughter!

lol

I hope the real hao does not meet her...or maybe I do...

"watches bakura run off with ryou" should someone help him?

OMG! I love it! Best ever! I love how you incorporate leather shoes. Great story!

*ruffles both Ottawa's and Rye's hair* that was the most craziest hilarious fun packed story I've ever read well save for Chakat's work but still very nicely and creatively done you both cracked me up from start to finish my congrats to you both on such a nicely written if totally insane fic *she gives them uber hot bishies to oggle til the end of time* as thanks for this lovely story now if you excuse me I have a certain messenger god to make life hell for if he thought The Drifter and The Death were bad LETS see how he likes it when THE QUEEN OF THE DRAGON RACE JOINS THE FUN*her form explodes into a white dragon that stretched the length of Slifer and Shenron combined with purple blue and white eyes before she dove for Hermes and began the systematic torture starting with putting him in the body of the man who played Barnie for a good fifty years before moving him onto the next sappiest sugary sweet thing she could find* that should do gtg now JA NE*continues to over see Herme's punishment*

this calls for a ' AWWWWWWWWWWW' moment

haha good y ea and go riddance (she like my 2nd least fav char. -_-)

i thought it was so cute the way yami let yugi hear his heart

kawii!

BABIES! CONGRATULATION LMAO XD

i love this story it was awesome

thank you so much for sharing

Autumn: This is getting less confusing?

Rika: Hehe, I like.

Autumn: Continue into good and slighty confusing story!

Rika: I'm not sure who my favorite is... Ottawa or Rye...

Great ending! Loved it.

roflmao!

i love this story

the last chapter killed me XD

it so freakin random and insane

this pretty much made my day

and the funny thing is i read mostly every chapter after yugioh abridged

so it made it twice as funny

XDDDDD

i really look forward to the next chap

*laughing to hard in delight to give a coherent review*

ok lol out of pure curiosity

were you read the Kane Chronicles when you wrote this?

i'm not saying it's a bad thing

but i recognized alot of things

but i like this

it the begn and i'm already laughing