This was good! Brought back 2300AD very clearly to me. Good job!

That damn lab 16. I hated fighting enemies in the future. The flashbacks, I tell ya. Heheheh. Anyway, this is quite beautiful, and I always enjoy reading hopeful stories. Wonderful descriptions here-just enough imagery. Thanks for sharing.

It was quite interesting and it's nice to know that I'm not the only person wwith Lucca as their faveorite Chrono Trigger character.

Very nice. I always thought that portion of the game was very depresing and you captured that well. Good work

Not too too bad, but it was more a replay of the events in the game than a look into Lucca's head. If it had been an actual look into Lucca's head, I probably would have fainted for the second time today.

-the collector of data-

-bra1n1ac-

Wow! Y'know, Lucca is my second favorite character (next to Magus) and I really enjoyed this fic. There aren't enough Lucca fics...

I have one suggestion. Never use the same word to describe something, especially in the only three or four sentences. You did it twice. This is no flame though. I really liked how you showed Lucca's thoughts. Overall the story was very good.