| Reviews for The Seal of Legion |
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Ariadne Venegas chapter 1 . 3/17/2019 I really like how diferent it was! Also how thrown of her axis Sakura was left after losing Naruto’s chasing her or even knowing her. I hope your Sakura got stronger for it! What I understand in the series it is that the tailed beasts can’t be killed because they are being of pure chakra so Naruto can’t kill them only seal them better. Maybe he can unte them and seal the Jubi in him? So no one can use themanymore and make himself inmortal as he could so it’s never escape orsend them to some void inter dimessions? Also unless Tsunade send Jiraiya to travel with him he willbe as missed nin as Sasuke. I would love to see how his travel goes and what will happen when he met Bee who is friend with his beast? |
sonic chapter 1 . 12/4/2017 I liked the one-shot! |
alboc chapter 1 . 9/20/2017 This 'fill the holes in my memory' is very similar to what happened to Matt Cauthon in the Wheel of Time Series by Robert Jordan. Very good work. |
Rakaan chapter 1 . 1/21/2016 Man, I'm so sad this ended here. |
Anon E. Moose chapter 1 . 5/2/2015 What I wonder most is how can Naruto reconcile his new attitude with who and what he is. He himself has a bijuu sealed inside yet he thinks of those like only as "containers". That those would/should share the agony of the bijuu if the bijuu overpowers the person. That's really dehumanizing and heartless. What is also missing is a look at the bijuu themselves. If they are at first like humans but don't die then of course they will hate people. Sealing them agin and again and subjecting them to suffering will not help. Especiall since they are immortal. Naruto's plan is therefore doomed to fail and be a waste of time; it will only cause more suffering for bijuu AND the unlucky jinchuuriki. It will ironically also help Akatsuki since the bijuu cannot defend themselves through their hosts or help them even if only to help themselves and when they get free they will be weakened; easy pickings to be then sealed inside Gedo Mazo. That should make Pein's/Nagato's/Obito's/Madara's plan a breeze. Good job, Naruto! |
sekmarcspn chapter 1 . 7/11/2014 Fantastic story! Can't say I've read anything else quite like it and I'm sorry to hear that you've left the fandom because I would've loved to have seen this expanded on. Still, at least we have this much, so thanks for sharing! Happy Writing! |
Jagane chapter 1 . 3/30/2014 Beautiful story, makes me wish that there was more chapters just to see the focused Naruto and the Ino with the amped up willpower some more. |
Jebus Creiss chapter 1 . 3/21/2014 This is f&ing awesome. A usually NaruIno trope twisted with excellence. And the pacing was fine. (Know the WoT references well, and that was brilliant. Don't know much of fate/stay night, but got enough of be reminded of it with the creature of blades.) |
StillnotHere chapter 1 . 1/30/2014 Wonderful, and inventive creation of a powerful naruto. I wish him all the best. |
Racke chapter 1 . 12/29/2013 You know, finding this story, I expected an Ino/Naruto type semi-romance thing. The stealing of memories would've allowed her to identify with him, and the stolen memories would've left him empty to be filled with memories of a new love. It fit perfectly. Then shit happened, and suddenly "romance" was tossed out the window because it obviously wasn't important, and Naruto did the stupidest brilliant thing I've ever heard of him doing, and the Kyuubi lived up to the name of "hateful machine of destruction and malice" by being a deceitful little bastard, and then Naruto stubbornly refused to let it bother him and used it to become someone else that he could be content being even without his former memories. I just kept getting blindsided until I was seriously wondering if I'd start seeing double, and then Naruto just throws that final line into it, and suddenly you just know that he's going to be alright. Because he's just as wonderfully idiotic as always. Even if having that kind of sign on your door would be super-awesome. |
TharzZzDunN chapter 1 . 11/4/2013 This was interesting, I didn't really see the Robert Jordan taint to it, but then I quit that after book 2 just repeated everything that happened in book 1. Cheers! |
treavellergirl chapter 1 . 10/4/2013 This twist is something I have never read before with Naruto having so many peoples memories and experiences - all jinchuuriki. |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/13/2013 I like it. would you consider writing a short epilogue of when Naruto does come back? |
LinkedTortoise chapter 1 . 6/30/2013 I'd bet that Kyuubi never thought Naruto would turn around and try to kill him, same thing with Mat and the Eelfinn. And lava safety is only for those who don't heal before it becomes fatal. |
random-k chapter 1 . 5/13/2013 wow! thats an interesting direction |